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E2W

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 5 applicants • updated april 1, 2024

 

SHIN JIAE 

PLOTLINE. uncover

BIRTHDATE. february 23, 1995

FACECLAIM. seo jisoo, lovelyz  

LOVE INTEREST. open

STATUS. chosen /// author's character 

 

APP COUNT.

complex: 2 

switch up: 1

starlight: 2

ring ring: 1

JENNA SHIN

PLOTLINE. young luv 

BIRTHDATE. october 27, 2000 

FACECLAIM. winter, aespa 

LOVE INTEREST. open

STATUS. chosen /// author's character

 

RINA'S THOUGHTS. pictures will link back to the characters.

CHOI AERIN 

PLOTLINE. complex 

BIRTHDATE. may 9, 1997

FACECLAIM. luda, wjsn 

LOVE INTEREST. kim yugyeom 

STATUS. accepted

 

RINA'S THOUGHTS. hello, lightning mcqin, back again with your "aha, i'm already done" antics! i was so excited when you said you'd be bringing back aerin, and with such a pretty faceclaim too (though i'll always miss seungyeon of course). 

 

"korean: is korean" made me snort. i love you. peak writing. though honestly, sometimes it does feel a bit weird to have to explain their native languages, no? her curling iron is her best friend, that's me with my hair dryer, honestly. can't do without it. can't wait to see her go from local hobo aerin to actually passable in fashion aerin /j she's not that bad. now if she was wearing sweats and sandals everywhere...

 

personality looks good! it's easy to read and decipher. naturally, i'm in a corner crying because someone mentioned lovelyz. you know how i feel, why would you say that okno. her parents honestly, good on her for going to yg (although... choices). koala aerin is back back back back back again, she could definitely use jen as an armrest since jen is a whole 2 feet tall (i jest). 

 

foaming at the mouth over mentions of infinite and lovelyz as one does. the lovelyz members she's closest with are almost my bias line, icb. (i say that like my bias line doesn't change every time one of the lovelyz girls breathes. except for #1 spot, that'll always be jisoo.) aw, trauma bonding. okNO. crack duo is accurate, they've always been that way. note to self, make aerin angry at some point..... 

 

not going to lie, i was definitely expecting her color to be green throughout the app but i was definitely bamboozled. this isn't a huge problem, more of just a question from curiosity's sake, but i believe luda has a rapper position in wjsn. would you say that aerin has rap talent? i'm perfectly okay with it if she does, i just want to know. 

 

i love, love love is who by minseo and i cry. it fits so well for aerin! it would definitely be an interesting vibe for someone from e2w to have a solo like that. 

 

the way i'm laughing at her love story. ing idiots is all i have to say (like lliterally any of my kids are ever smarter than that). all in all, i'm not really seeing any problems with aerin, and i don't think she's bland, she's just not overly spicy and dramatic and that's perfectly fine. thank you so much for applying and there's just that one question i had listed above in her way! (feel free to just answer it in the comments.) 

 

thank you for the clarification and aerin has been accepted!

SONG MINJU

PLOTLINE. complex

BIRTHDATE. august 9, 1999

FACECLAIM. haseul, artms 

LOVE INTEREST. open to matchmake 

STATUS. accepted   

 

RINA'S THOUGHTS. hello, hawoo! you have no idea how excited i am. i always see everyone else getting the queen herself and it's finally my turn. there always has to be a twin with braincells and can confirm minju would be the only twin with braincells in e2w. not a huge issue and more of a nitpick, but i would say she is  closer to fluent if she's 91% in english. i don't think even i'm that fluent okno. 

 

"rabid dog on steroids" i snorted i'm sorry. you know i'm always ready to take a knife to sweet innocent characters minding their own bus— ahem i mean i would never stab minju. naturally her personality and background look great, no issues here. her soulmeme, maybe i cried. jiae and minju would have a cute friendship for sure. the way i'm still snorting at the thought of minju trying to set up jen and jongho. it's like that one tiktok sound that goes "horrified looks from everyone in the room" lmao. naturally we have to have ateez here, the es (ft my son) themselves. 

 

haseul, my girl. i relate on that doritos trivia so hard. i will keep her weakness in mind if e2w ever needs to have a try not to laugh night. minju :handshake: jiae on hating dolls. another affection leech i see. (good, we need them.) benjamin cucumber i—it's time for me to go walk my goldfish while i cry laugh. her playlist is wonderful of course. 

 

those vocal twins. i see you really had it out for me, huh. and ning as a dance twin. what if i leave right now. yg is foul. very foul. but we know that. i don't even know how much you know about the fun i have with yg and tormenting these yg groups but... you've given me plenty of material to work with in that headlines section, oh noooo. again, these aren't big issues but you did mention an eunbi and kwon and a pop girls in the headlines section. i know minju is a reused character so i imagine these are probably from old iterations, but it's me nitpicking again hello :D 

 

smh that's not even stayc's full discography. where are the tak remixes? flexin on my ex? jk that one's unreleased but stayc are preparing for a comeback so expect me to be ing intolerable. as one does. ANYWAY all that aside, the other slayc simp doesn't disappoint. this reminds me to send you the rest of my isa pics. and clean up my phone. EHM anyway, minju ofc looks lovely and she will be very very VERY accepted once those two nitpicks are satisfied (and i agree 1000% to that password, i already plan on that and you can take that to the bank) 

YOO SARANG

PLOTLINE. starlight

BIRTHDATE. december 25, 1997

FACECLAIM. ryu sujeong, lovelyz

LOVE INTEREST. bang chan

STATUS. pending

 

RINA'S THOUGHTS. hello, liam, thank you for applying! i'm always excited to see ryu sujeong ofc, i'm quite gay for her. let's get into the review! little love, how cute. 89% is definitely not something i would consider just conversational. that's far closer to fluent. and as for her knowing japanese, 43% isn't something i would consider beginner fluency. that's almost halfway fluent.

 

reading through the personality, i have to ask... who is mirae? and if she's so overwhelming and caring why does she ignore people for literal days? and how does she make so many friends so quickly if she comes across cold a

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Cattogom 21 streak #1
Chapter 5: so, i'm back again after fixing snow's app!

regarding one of her nicknames, i decided to delete the 'nong' part. that was me trying to get her as many nicknames as possible lol
i deleted her chinese's ethnicity too. i thought i would be alright as some authors accepted that as long as half of the character's ethnicity is similar to the fc. but i respected your stance on this!
deleted chinese in her language but i'm keeping korean conversational. what do you think about it? do you think she's more than conversational in korean or should i lower the percentage? xD
combined reserved with reserved communication while adding 'impatient' as her other negative trait!
wrote the age when she joined the dance cover team in the background, she joined at 14.
wrote the name of the dance cover team in the pre-debut experience, and the dance crew was named MVP.
added the thai nicknames for all!
already adjusted only 1 member color for her!
i made her join yg in july, but if you think it was a bit too late considering blackpink debuted in august... i could move even further back ;;
deleted the scandal about her leaving the group too! my mind thought they were confirmed to have pre-release lmao
god, i swear when i wrote snow app, i couldn't find any of your characters' apps Q_Q but all is good, added jiae, jenna and song minju (in collaboration with -haruman)!

thank you so much for the review and please wait for the love interest xD oh oh, if you need more thai characters in the other stories, i could work on some!
Cattogom 21 streak #2
Chapter 5: hey rina! thank you for the review, lemme read them slowly and fixed them until she becomes a better snow xD
b2utyvip01 #3
Chapter 5: thank you for the review! i'm so glad that you feel her endearing! it is my first time trying to write such a pure soul like her so i am so nervous to know your review! as for what you ask me to fix, i have done it and i underline them so you can easily find them! thank you so much for the review once again <3
havens #4
Chapter 5: i fixed huira's app! i added the groups the crew was a back-up dancer for + for her training years, i didn't change anything since it's actually 2014-2017 stated there so i think it's just a little bit of misunderstanding :D

huira's dance crew, made up dance crew (mudc) is fictional (which i think is pretty obvious but i just want to mention it c:) i was searching for existing crews and wrote "made up dance crew" but it grew on me so i did not change it lolol

that's all! thank you again <3333
havens #5
Chapter 5: aaa i'm glad you enjoyed reading her app unu i've been dying to use seulgi and when i saw the plotlines, i immediately thought yep she was perfect 😌 and yes saerom our queen <33

i can only imagine e2w members crave their affection from huira and her giving what she thinks is her best but it's just a teeny tiny bit but e2w accepts it everytime ;a; nevertheless they love this non-emotional bun

jslsksls jen is just tired yes i am sorry little bb u have to endure huira, i'd really love to see their relationship evolve (if ever huira's chosen!!)

tbh i base my fcs on the plotlines/positions that are open bcs i really don't /like/ using other talent twins for any of my babies ... anw that was just my preference >< sure, i will add a back-up twin for her no worries !!

i'm glad that u thought of her as a breathe of fresh air, that made me happy aaa tysm for the review! i will fix those as soon as the internet comes back because the service provider said it'd be down for 36 hours (i am really pissed off aaa)
-yeonjungs #6
is kiss of life too nugu?
meowzwrites 11 streak #7
Chapter 4: Since the story starts in 2017, is it ok for me to use a FC that matches the age of the character in 2017?
Also may I know why the groups listed are blacklisted?
-haruman #8
Chapter 5: eeeeeeeeeee, so speedy with the reviews, the heck? no, no, don't apologize for nitpicking, it's completely okay, if you hadn't known that minju was reused, this could literally be a suspicion of plagiarism, so my fault for not checking thoroughly, really.

yeah, we love stabbi- *ahem* no stabbing happening here, folks. absolutely not :eyes:

yg is a piece of trash confirmed-

welp- i do not have a justification for that asides from the fact that they're remixes but welp- why am i saying that when i literally added all language versions and the sped up versions of all the slayc songs- SEND ME THOSE ISA PHOTOS AND I WILL CRY OVER THEM ALL, THANK YOU-

anyway, yeah, i fixed the things mentioned and thank you for the review once again! :3
hzhfobsessed #9
Chapter 5: ahhhh thank you for being so speedy yourself ehe (lightning mcqin had me CRACKING UP pls). my vpn is not currently on so if this comment doesn't post we're gonna have some Problems with aff and my internet LMAO BUT ANYWAY--

the way i also cry when i think about infinite and lovelyz and how woollim ED THEM OVER agh. and truly >:) 2ae trauma bonding is what they do best. and ofc any antics involving jen will naturally be crack.

tbh i was also conflicted on whether or not to make her color green but then i was like, ain't no way yg's respecting their favorite colors pfft. so purple it is!

and to answer your question, yes, sort of -- aerin can hold a rap position if she needs to, but she doesn't consider herself super talented in rap. she's been training for a while and has picked up on some techniques, but it's neither her interests nor natural talent, so i didn't really mention it much.

and TRUE dumb kids as ; like come on, yall knew dispatch was going to be stalking idols and yet??? bffr yknow??

i'm really glad e2w's back >:)))) in my heart, e2w is a real group with real people and they are my bias group, crack and trauma and all
HiRitu #10
Chapter 3: hi question, is the complex plotline allowed to be a part of a previous girl group that she left or that disbanded?
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