'Cause They Could See Us

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In the end, they both lose everything.

Because in this peculiar game they both started, running away is useless since no matter where they go, their predator will surely be able to find them.

Foreword

Yeah, I guess I have to change my foreword for this one since it was stated in here that this story will not exceed between 2-3 chapters but as you all can see it has 7 excluding the epilogue. By the way, this is solely based on the movie 'The Adjustment Bureau' directed by George Nolfi.

A thank you gift to my friends who supported my stories.

Disclaimer: Disclaimed!

Author's Thoughts
yuuri_eriful
Last chapter will be posted soon. Heads up! ^-^
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Whatthe-27 #1
Chapter 8: This story is beautiful waaahhh ಥ_ಥ
Liza_Blessedx2 #2
Chapter 8: My heart is breaking!!! what a very emotional story, loved it!!!!and thank you authornim for the epilogue. <3
Snehu_piggu #3
Chapter 8: U just made me cry authornim..thanku for such a beautiful story..it's just so mesmerizing to read stories like this..and do u love rain??
I too love it!!!
Terry1502 #4
Chapter 8: Oh gosh how could you do this to meeeeeee!!!! "who are you?" ahhhh my heart!!! Huhu still the best story i ever read!
angelamy #5
Chapter 8: "But who are you?"
Easy, I'm the reader who witnessed the whole story. (^̮^)
My heart really aches. Why did i continue reading this, i'll never know. Or maybe i already do. :D
Komawa. Im happy i read such a nice story
Keep on (^o^)/
angelamy #6
Chapter 6: No it is not fun, it's heartbreaking ｡ﾟ(ﾟ^ิД^ิﾟ)ﾟ｡ 
TheFanFicHoeX #7
Chapter 8: "Have I already told you how much I love you?”
Painful because JW cannot remember, but then Kyu asks...
"I don't remember too. Do you mind telling me once again?"
AND MAN, DAMN, MY TEARS, LITERALLY THEY CAME RUSHING DOWN MY FACE. I WAS BAWLING i stopped reading and just had a good cry. Ughhh... This illness really is super scary. And what's more is that JW is still young. They can have much ahead in their lives, but then he has this... And it isn't only him who is affected... It pains everyone who surrounds him and loves him T_T

Anyway I came back to where I left off, I was ok then, I was even laughing a bit because of some funny lines... RIGHT UNTIL THAT LAST LINE. I mean I saw that coming, but reading it there, gosh my heart for Kyuhyun... And for Jongwoon too! I cried my eyes put again... Damn.

That was good author-nim. It was bittersweet... Bitter and painful and sad because Kyu has to suffer like that. But we know he will also suffer, just in a different sense, if he isn't with JW anyway... So... It still covers "good ending" in a way because even with painful instances with JW, he cam have all those amazing and happy memories he shared with him. :)

Again, thanks for this fic author-nim. I hope you can write more kyusung!!!! But hopefully less tragic/angsty/problematic than this! Hahahahaha.... Now I have to look for a freakinfluffy kyusung story!!! I cannot sleep with a heavy heart hahaha ~
TheFanFicHoeX #8
Chapter 7: I wonder who they met or Kyu met who was actually Junsu... If it was laid out plainly in previous chapters, then I'm sorry I missed it :( I have to re-read it in whole again!
TheFanFicHoeX #9
Chapter 3: OMG no. Jongwoon has a forgetting thing disease?? I'm already heartbroken T_T
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