we are no gods (an eye for an eye)

Description

The discovery of a magical notebook completely changed Jisung and Chenle's lives. The difference is, Chenle found its power something to be worshipped as long as he knew what he should do with it, while fear was the only thing Jisung could feel about it, as it slowly interfered with their once-peaceful friendship and turned it into anything but.

Foreword

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Starring: Park Jisung, Zhong Chenle

Word count: 4,576.

Chapters: 1.

Date completed: June 11th, 2022.


Entered 𝓣𝓱𝓮 𝓜𝔂𝓼𝓽𝓮𝓻𝔂 𝓸𝓯 𝓛𝓲𝓯𝓮 🆆🆁🅸🆃🅸🅽🅶 🅲🅾🅽🆃🅴🆂🆃 (The Mystery of Life Writing Contest)

under the prompt:

"Please just trust me."
"But they told me to not trust you."
"That was a lie. You should have never trusted THEM."

and these challenges (spoilers ahead!):

1. ᴋɪʟʟ ᴀ ᴍᴀɪɴ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ 2. ᴡʀɪᴛᴇ ᴀ ꜰʟᴀᴡᴇᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ (ᴇɪᴛʜᴇʀ ᴘʜʏꜱɪᴄᴀʟʟʏ, ᴍᴇɴᴛᴀʟʟʏ, ᴏʀ ᴊᴜꜱᴛ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴘᴇʀꜱᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ) 4. ᴛᴜʀɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴍᴀɪɴ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ᴇᴠɪʟ 5. ᴡʀɪᴛᴇ ᴀ ꜱᴛᴏʀʏ ᴡɪᴛʜ ɴᴏ ʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴛɪᴄ ꜱʜɪᴘ 6. ᴡʀɪᴛᴇ ᴀ ꜱᴛʀᴏɴɢ ꜰʀɪᴇɴᴅꜱʜɪᴘ ꜱᴛᴏʀʏ 9. ʙʀᴇᴀᴋ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ 10. ᴘᴜᴛ ᴀ ꜱʜᴏᴄᴋɪɴɢ ᴛᴡɪꜱᴛ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ꜱᴛᴏʀʏ


Author's notes: first time writing a non-romance story I think?? this will be hella fun.

Content warning: character death, mildly graphic description.

Inspirations: the prompt, the challenges, Jisung, Chenle, and Death Note.


Review credits:

79.5/100 by LUST


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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 1: That was...fascinating! The way Chenle held other people's lives in his hands and used it for his own purposes was great, and it reminded me of Death Note, which I loved. And the ending truly was sad, but also the only way to bring Chenle back to himself.
This was written nicely and I loved the message behind it. Thank you for writing this.