Sinners in Heaven
Description
“It’s his usual posture to walk with his hands buried in his pockets, his eyes down on the ground. He does it so naturally as if he knows how beautiful the sunlight bounces off his soft hair, how goddamn attractive he looks just walking.”
Foreword
I wrote this for an assignment for my Creative Writing module. The word limit was 1.5K and the one shot I post will be exactly like the one I handed in to have it graded. We'll see how I fare LOL. This is also gonna be different from my other works; it's a lot shorter and more... vague... I spoon feed my readers a lot with descriptions, but I made this story more ambiguous so you fix the puzzle pieces on your own!
Anecdote:
So I had this piece workshopped in class, using the exact same characters as I used here. A few of my classmates told me that it was uncomfortable to read and was like, "I haaaaaate Kai." And I laughed because that was not my intention. You guys be the judge of it!
Results:
So I got my results back and I think I got an upper second class honours for this fic! I honestly thought it was gonna be worse than that, since I've received many mixed sentiments on this story.
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Here are my other works as of 1st December 2015:
One Shots / Completed
Baekhyun: His Dark Side [M], Unravelled, Kiss Me, Drink Me [M], All But You [M], A Cheater's Secret [M], He's Kinda Hot, That XX, When You See Death
Kai: The Little Bumblebee, AA • K1A • IE [M], Sinners in Heaven, A Cheater's Secret [M], When You See Death
Sehun: Good Girl, Bad Girl, Doctor's Fix [M], y, Free but Married [M], My Mother's Boss [M], Train Hard [M]
Chanyeol: How You Get The Girl, Passenger 61C [M]
D.O.: Come To Me [M]
Ongoing
Baekhyun: Life as Mrs. Byun [M], Rules & Regulations, Working For The Trinity [M], Kiss Me, Drink Me [M], My Sister's Boyfriend [M]
Kai: Benefits of Being a Babysitter [M], Working For The Trinity [M], The Heat
Sehun: The Three C's [M], Working For The Trinity [M]
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