One More

Description

Baekhyun hums, happy, and copies the other boy shamelessly when he says, “one more”.

One more turns into a lot more.

 

Foreword

there's probably like a thousand mistakes becase a) it's past midnight here, b) i proofread after posting which is a DUMB thing to do and c) my beta-reader is otheriwse preoccupied at the moment and couldn't check for me (ilu be good study hard)!!~ so sorry about that. also boring DISCLAIMER: i (sadly) do not own any of the characters mentioned in this story

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shinbbpc
#1
Chapter 1: Awww so cute!!><
kkomde #2
Chapter 1: seriously authornim. your way with words is something more than amazing. I'm binge-reading your fics (although I've read most of them before) and honestly it's like i'm reading them for the first time. The emotions your words deliver are raw and hit the right spot. ♡♡♡
Emycyingztars
#3
THIS IS SO UNDERRATED OK
yeolsnim
#4
so cute omg
HyeSeong21
#5
This is so sweet! Thank you for this really!!
Chanye2015X #6
Chapter 1: While Chanyeol waves at the "aww-ing" fans.

Did you mean, "AHHHHHHHHHSDASDFASDUHGAAHHHHHHHHHHH-ing" fans?

But omg I just love your style of writing so much! Everything in here is perfection; the absolute adorableness of sleeping while they snuggle up with each other, the way you describe the confession in an interaction with each other through expressions+actions instead of just words, the phrase: one more turns into a lot more. Also, I loved the last bit with the rest of the members im crying it's hilarious!!! OMG I JUST FREAKED OUT AT THAT PART I LOVED IT OMG THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS I WILL CHERISH YOUR WORK
_Sherry_
#7
Chapter 1: why can't I stop reading ???? These story's are so so cute. .. I'm in love with them
LeaderLiCiXD
#8
I adore the confession without the typical "I like/love you" especially since they're best friends and usually would have to explain which kind of like/love they mean. He described his feeling in a simple way but that didn't make it any less exciting waiting for the response, which was also perfect XD
caffeinatedlyyours
#9
Chapter 1: AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW!

That was so cute, and adorbs. I love how simple and perfect this was.

So fluffy~~~~

Also really love group's additional comments at the end!
Baekyeolx61 #10
Chapter 1: This is really cute and simple, nice job on this oneshot! I enjoyed reading it alot! ^^