Catch Me If You Can

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People look at Heaven and Hell as something quite sinister.  Hell, naturally, is the place of purgatory, where the spirits of those who misbehave are sent in eternal damnation for the sins of their living bodies.  Heaven, obviously, is the place of paradise, where those who are good and righteous are welcomed, where their eternities are blessed with goodness and fulfilment, more so than their living bodies could ever comprehend.  Hell is darkness, fire and brimstone, torture and soul-crushing torment, a form of evil so deliciously pure, only truly lost souls appreciate it and embrace it to its fullest.  Heaven is light, happiness and bliss, freedom and serenity, white clouds and angels with wings that would make even the peacock shameful of his plumage.  Hell is under the tyrannical control of Lucifer, Hades, Satan, Beelzebub, the father of contention; The Devil.  Heaven is held by the righteous leader of Adonai, Yahweh, Jehovah, Allah, the Lord; God.

What if I told you that this was nothing more than fear mongering?  A falsehood, preached to us by our religious leaders, those we look to for sense and meaning of life, solely in order to keep us in line and to control us for their very beliefs.  Beliefs that have been warped in the name of greed, of control, of deceit.  What if I told you that, no matter what you did in your life today, every single one of us would go to Heaven and walk through the "Pearly Gates" and live as angels?  But that our lives as angels were not as depicted in the paintings on the ceiling of the Sistine Chapel.  We would not revert to the form of cherubs, sprouting wings from our shoulder blades.  We would not be holy beings, walking around, blessing each other, hearing the prayers of those we left behind.  What if I told you that there was no such thing as Hell?  No such thing as purgatory, no fire and brimstone, no caged souls.  That the eternal damnation preached to us in sermons was about as real as the events on the Jersey Shore or the Real Housewives of Orange County.  Or that there was no God.  No Allah.  No ultimate, omni-present, all-knowing, ethereal being that listens to his subjects on Earth as they pray, was the creator of the Universe as we know it, and the cause of the disasters recounted in the many different books that teach the tenants of your relevant religions.

What if I told you that nobody was ever turned away at the Gates for their actions in life, no matter how horrific or callous they were, but could be banished from Heaven for their actions in the Afterlife, and only if their actions could bring the absolute and permanent destruction of Heaven?  And those spirits that were banished were left to roam the Afterworld that coexists with our own.  Removed from their position of grace, dismissed and forgotten, forsaken and alone.

What if I told you that angels walk with us every day?  That souls come to Earth and walk among us, sit with us, listen to us and watch us, mostly unseen by our mortal eyes, but felt by our soul.  But, even though we could feel them, we could not touch them.

What if I told you that those that are banished from the place we know as Heaven are often found by a force more sinister than The Devil?  And that the angels that walked with us were there to save us from this very force?

What if I told you that it was also possible for an angel to fall from Heaven?  To willingly jump, to sacrifice themselves and their eternity in the name of something more powerful than every God created by mankind, with only one way to save them, because failure to save them presented them with eternity with the banished.

What if I told you that the only person who could save an angel from the fate of the indescribable force was you?  That is ...

If you catch them.

Foreword

Here is my new story.  My aim is to write one new chapter every week, but I won't promise that.  If you want to keep up with the story, please subscribe.  I think AFF will let you know once a new chapter has been added (I don't know how it works, to be honest.)

Thank you so very much to 9DancingStars for my cover.  If you would like your own cover image, visit the S♥NEs Graphic Shσp at http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/679642.

The story comes from my vision of how SNSD's "Catch Me If You Can" video should have been.  It's much more extended and detailed than my vision, but one that I enjoyed so much that I had to share it.  It's not a romance story like "The Evening of The Storm" and its sequel "The Day of Discovery".  It's SNSD as eight members, (even though I do believe that SNSD are nine members, but I don't think I would forget Miss Jung, even in this story), with a special twist.

You will note that there are quite a few references to science fiction and action films, TV shows and novels.  You will even notice that, occasionally, I place lines creatively sampled (or rather, "stolen and completely misued") from these films, especially the Chinese lines from Serenity and Firefly.  That is because I love Firefly / Serenity and for no other reason.  I'm starting to find that phrases from the franchise are falling into my every day speech too.  This is merely for fun, and isn't intended to have some kind of deeper meaning.  They were also taken from an online resource and I am not aware of any accuracy issues, despite native Chinese speakers looking over them, but I enjoy using them.  I mean, how often does one get to call somebody a "liu kou shui de biao zi he hou zi de er zi"? (I believe that translates to "son of a drooling and a monkey", source: The Firefly and Serenity Database.)

Please comment as much as you want, feel free to suggest new ideas on my profile, and please, enjoy this story.

Please note that this story has been entered into the Wicked Writing Contest.

Thanks also to AmpersandAR and Kpop_addict4ever for reviewing my story. You can request a review from AmpersandAR at Ampersand Ads & Reviews and Kpop_addict4ever at the All Season's Advertisement / Review Shop.

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SHINeeMe08
#1
wow..the story is so interesting..
princessY #2
Chapter 14: This is the most amazing sci-fi fanfic i have ever read. Keep writing!
mischievous_akmood
#3
Chapter 14: whoa... that ending... it's kinda relevant with what's actually going on with Jessica these days...
I really like this fic and thank you for writing it XD
mischievous_akmood
#4
Chapter 10: I don't usually read action or sci fi fics, but this fic is pretty interesting so far and I really like your writing style... even though some parts are a bit hard for me to wrap my head around, I can picture everything pretty clearly ^^
please update soon ^^
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 9: My goodness, you have me on the edge of my seat!! Great job!
heejung1489 #6
Chapter 4: Your story is very interesting. The setting, events, and characters is very impressive. I will be waiting for your next update.^^