Legend of the Wolf and the Girl in the Red Cloak

Something Wicked This Way Comes
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A long time ago, long ago, so long ago that no one can remember, and no tree can remember, and no rock can remember; so long ago that the rocks had not been made, high in the mountains where the people were said to be able to communicate with the sky by just cupping their hands around their mouth and calling to the heavens, there lived a girl from a small village and her parents. The village was a quiet place that lived in fear of the dark, dark trees, so they built a wall so high and retreated so far into themselves that the world forgot about them. 

This girl was young and beautiful, and although the woods may be thick, the mountain did not do much to cover her beauty. It was said that when the sun went down and the stars came out, their light that shone down from the heavens upon her face illuminated the night like a thousand torches and even the sun grew jealous.   It was not her face that drew people near her, however, but her good heart. The girl was so fair in temperament that even the wild creatures of the forest could be tamed by her touch.   Each morning, the girl went to draw water from the well, and each morning, she returned to the village to give it back to her mother, who loved her daughter very much. Her mother loved the girl so much that she made her a fine cloak that was intended for her wedding, made of the finest cotton fibers; it had been painstakingly woven on the loom for several months. The cloak was a pure white, the same as the snow that falls at twilight and is still under the night sky. The mother, unfortunately, never got to give her daughter this cloak.   In the cold winter, there lives a beast that takes over the lungs of the weak and the old, and the mother fell under its heavy hand. Before she died, however, the mother dyed this c
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abbylee123
Triple update today!! <3 I have most of the story written already, I am just doing a final once over. I hope to have the story finished within a week, so get ready!! (ALSO check out my new story Bender) I am getting ready to release my other story called Darling... I'm very excited!

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Sarahindago #1
Chapter 19: damn i finally got the time to read this and I must say i cant stop reading it!! i loved the bits about legends u put between the chapters! do u actually come out with those stories by yourself or it's like a real legend out there? just curious. ANYWAYS I LOVE UR STORY SO MUCH!
vujuha #2
Chapter 35: You guys really love making us cry. This is the second time I cried today.
vampwrrr
#3
Chapter 35: I cri. It's almost one am....and I cri.
vampwrrr
#4
Chapter 34: It's almost 1am and I've discovered this again and I'm like OoO!
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#5
Chapter 35: I had a feeling it would end this way but I was hoping to be wrong ㅠㅠ nonetheless it was written so well! Really loved this fic (:
Bana_Bana
#6
Chapter 34: 。:゚(;´∩`;)゚:。 This story is so beautiful and tragic!! The sheer emotion your writing invokes is something to behold. I had to keep wiping my eyes from the sheer amount of tears I shed these last few chapters. Thank you, dear writer, for sharing this wonderful fic!! ( •́ ‿ ,•̀ ) I'll be patiently anticipating for what's to come in the future.
vampwrrr
#7
Chapter 33: Taminie! Nuuuuu! But...but...but...he was so sweet and loyal, and brave, and...and...*sobs* *squeaks* wae?
amanda_exoforever #8
Chapter 33: OMFG I HATE HIM ! but im kinda confsed, I feel like jinki's switch from being a gentle boy turning into a psychopath was too fast. It was like a switch was flipped and he was acting like a different person. It just kinda didn't make sense how a blacksmith boy could control the whole village, and not the chief or something.. But i really love your story, it's beautifully written!
vampwrrr
#9
Chapter 32: Jinki! What the heck, man? I was rooting for you! We were all rooting for you!