Whiterock at Midnight [Discontinued]

Description

Taemin has grown up with stories of mermen whose talons could punch holes into ship hulls and sink them within minutes, of mermaids who seduced sailors into abandoning ship before devouring them. Yet when Taemin is thrown overboard and saved by the very creature he has been taught to fear, he finds himself developing an undeniable attraction to the merman.

Foreword

This is an expansion of a writing challenge I did. I’m weak when it comes to longer pieces, but I think—hope—that I’ve improved since finishing Spring Fever

 

Anyways, I would like to thank Salma (Hawk_Meh) and Ana (pikasquad) for their invaluable feedback on this story. I tried my best to incorporate their suggestions into my work, but I still have a long ways to go. I also did a bit of tweaking after passing chapters through them, so any mistakes you may find are entirely my own.

 

I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I loved/hated writing it. Your feedback, good or bad, is appreciated at usual!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Baekyeol4everz
#1
Chapter 4: Although this was discontinued I still enjoyed reading up to where you stopped all the same. I really liked Minho’s character, he seems so kind and magical. I can’t help but imagine a bad ending for the duo though!
Amezaiku
#2
I'll just keep on hoping you'll continue this story╮(╯▽╰)╭
Amezaiku
#3
Chapter 4: Please please update( ´_ゝ`)
cottenstuff #4
//screaming//
_hayan_nabi_
#5
Chapter 4: Fantasy + 2min = Happy me!
I freaking love fantasy 2min and what's even better is that you added merman Minho!
AffxtedShawol
#6
Chapter 4: merman minho <33333
gosh they're so cute together T_T seriously T_T all that skinship T_T <////3
why didn't he give him a goodbye kiss <//3 oh well at least they've kissed at all o3o hehehhehehehhe don't ever stop flirting <333
thank you for the update ;u;)/ im excitedDddD
i wanna know more about mariana's trench o3o so cool if minho could take taemin there heheeh
Bored0ut0fHerMind
#7
Chapter 4: Waaaah! I didn't know this was being written! I love this from the spring fever challenge! Thank you for making this into a chaptered fic!

Hmm, maybe Minho is a prince? Can he grow legs? They can't do it without him growing legs LOL
shinning_usagi #8
Chapter 4: Omni gosh I screamed! I had just come back to reread some of your storis when I saw this! !! I'm so excited I'm trembling! !!! Thank you so much for all the effort you put into your stories! Is such an honor to read such talent ovo I'm grateful to be immersed into another one of your wonderful 2min stories! !

Anyways I digress! Amazing chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat ovo
SHINeeLove05
#9
Chapter 4: aww now I'm worried they would get cought meeting where's much more people heh ^^;;
hope they'll stay away from the trouble~