evanesce

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"Don't fall in love with him." They said. 

"He'll go missing." 



Sehun lives in a town, a cursed town. There's a saying that you will go missing once you turn 17, the only way you can free yourself of this curse if you find your way back after you disappear. Believing it's a groundless rumor, he goes on to love the new girl next door only to face the pain of waking up without her in another country. 

Foreword

"Don't get too close." 

That was the first thing Chayeon heard after her first encounter with the boy next door. Her family had just moved into town and people were already looking out for her, but why? All the neighborhood grannies and aunties warned her to not be too friendly with the boy next door. His name was Sehun and they met at the age of 15. 

 

Sehun didn't believe in curses, maybe that's why he got along with everyone so freely despite the saying that once you turn 17, you would go missing. If you were born in this town, chances were, you would disappear the moment the clock strikes twelve on your 17th birthday. He had an eye for the new girl who lived in the house next to his, facing a dilemma as he started to fall in love with her. 

 

On his 17th, a dreaded day, Sehun woke up in a city across the world without her. 


© krismatics 2015 

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yourfangirlmica #1
Oh my. I hope you update this!!
basma_lollipop
#2
O.M.G this fic is going to be awesome I can feel it I'm so excited
YysJihOshKris #3
Love it already!
Can't wait for more
XD
Amandaling #4
How to you even think of storykines like these
MhiRha
#5
I really really want to start reading this. I need more Sehun. Haha
molly_ni_123 #6
OMG I CAN'T TILL TO READ THIS FANFIC UPDATED SOON PLZZZ
Bookworm01
#7
Lovely! You never fail to impress me with the creative plots you always come up with, and how you have the courage to post these online. (I certainly don't have that kind of courage. TT.TT)
If I were Sehun, I'd say, “Well, they couldn't have picked a better day to kidnap me.” (Please sense the sarcasm. Please, please, PLEASE!)
But, on the other hand, however silly the belief was, he should've at least believed a tenth of it. Surely, you can't fully dismiss the teachings of the elders in a town; they know much more than our young minds can comprehend. We'll learn a lot by just listening to them. At least, that's what all the adults told us when we were younger.

Anyway, that's done and over with. I question the reasons or motives of the one behind this curse. It seems like something bad happened to whoever's responsible for this because it's not like we see people actually cursing an entire town every other day... I think maybe something made him/her hate the town so much to actually curse it. It could've been exile, torture, false accusations, or all of it, but there must be a reason. Revenge? Maybe he/she was taken away from everything he/she knew. Maybe he/she was the first one who was kidnapped and put under torture for something he/she didn't do. Maybe some people hated how he/she led such a peaceful life (assuming he/she did). Or maybe this person had some strange ability or was just really hated for being different but that hatred turned into something worse when they thought he/she did something bad to a person very dear to him/her. I don't know... I always like learning about the bad guys, even if they're so hate-worthy.
*I especially like the twisted, "I love games" bad guys and the "Oh-this-new-hero-is-like-the-sweetest-delicacy-ever-and-I-must-have-him!" bad guys... They're fun! (However, if they did live around here where I live, I'd be terrified to go out.)

Thanks so much for sharing the start! Really interesting! Keep it up!
florinaca #8
You haven't even released the first chapter and I'm already in love with it.
ggexotica #9
Waaaah.. I'm impressed!!! Not only sans defaut, ur other stories really have waaaay different plot than the others. Thumbs up!
dawnxiamara #10
You know what? I don't know where you get your plots in each of your stories. I know each story is very unique in their own way that's why I'm envious and jealous at the same time that you can think of a story in just a flick of your fingers. Some guys have all the luck I suppose. You should go into journalism especially writing seriously. Your writing is so good at a young age. So jealous of you. I'm an ahjumma and I can't even construct a sentence let alone a paragraph to begin with.
Back to the story, please notify me if you start on a new story, I'm sure to subscribe as well as upvote because I know you write amazingly.....