The Visitant

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Description

Some things are bound to haunt us...

 
But what if...
 
 
It's from the extraordinaire?
 
 
 
CHARACTERS:
 
 
Park Sandara / Dara
18 years old
 
The haunted.
 
 
Kim Jongin / Kai
18 years old
 
The protector.
 
 
 
 
AN: subscribe at your own risk! Kekeke. :)) I may not be good with scary stories yet... Please bear with me? Hehehe! Is KaiDara okay with you, guys?
 
Thank you! ❤️

Foreword

A little girl found herself running deep into the woods. It was nighttime already and she had recalled the scene she saw on her home.

 
 
Flashback
 
 
"Omma! Omma!" The little girl found her mother lying on the floor, face stricken with fear. She cried, sitting beside her mother's lifeless body.
 
Her father had died the same way a month ago and she was left with no one. She remembered what her mother had said to her grandmother that time, "No one exactly knew how he passed, ommeoni. We just found him sitting on a chair in our room and his face was kind of deformed. His lips were wide like he had screamed his lungs out. The police said that there were no traces of an intruder who tried to kill him. I've talked to the doctor but he said that it was most probably heart failure, which is unlikely since my husband has no heart disease..."
 
"Omma." The little girl continued to cry when she felt a cold wind blew behind her that made her shiver and then had goosebumps.
 
"Little girl..." Her eyes widened in horror. She turned around slowly and saw a young man standing in front of her. He was tall, had pale white skin, and his eyes were flaming red. The man was wearing a black suit and towered over the little girl. He smiled creepily at her that made her feel afraid. "You are mine now." His voice was loud and it roared all over the house. As if on cue, the little girl then started running.
 
 
End of Flashback
 
 
"Help! Help!" The little girl shouted as she ran as fast as she could. Tears were still flowing from her eyes that caused her vision to be blurry. She didn't notice a rock on the ground and because she was on a haste, she tripped. Her whole body fell on the floor and she heard loud laughing stinging to her ears.
 
The little girl closed her eyes and started crying.
 
"Crying is no use, darling. You don't have to be afraid." Then the man had mocked a very loud laugh again that crept her out.
 
And with all her might, she wanted to try to ask for help for the last time before she could be devoured by the visitant, she shouted.
 
"HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!"
 
 
 
 
 
 
AN: annyeong ~ :)) not sure where this is going but I have ideas. Don't worry. Kekeke! And this part kept bugging my mind so yep. Hmm.
 
I'm trying to write something here that is not in my comfort zone so I hope you'd still support me. ^.^ (You know? The slightly horror part. I've always wanted to write one but won't dare to do it. I'm not good at it. Huhu.) I will do my best though, I promise.
 
Sorry I posted another story. I've actually finished writing Mess We've Made, I'm just waiting for the poster to be done then I'll update it at once. Project Happiness is ongoing. :)
 
This story might just be a short one too. It depends. :) Anyway, hope you like this story. ^.^ Thank you!!
 

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DISCLAIMER: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of my imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
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Gonna update soon :> Thank you!

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athena_29 #1
Chapter 8: Update please 🙏🙏🙏
kang2noh
#2
Chapter 8: i really feel that what dara saw with kai is jut an illusion used by kris to trick her into making a deal with him. this is pretty good. i usually stay away from horror since i have a very over active imagination. well done.
Helencrisx #3
Chapter 4: Isso dos porta retratos e a coisa de abençoar a casa me lembra atividades paranormais em Tóquio
chiruka
#4
Chapter 8: waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i don't know Author-nim but I do imagine that Kris was the demon and yey my imagination is correct! :D waaaa waaaaaaaaaaa so happy that it was just another hallucination and what does it mean that Dara will have to die? waaaaa KaiDara so sweet~ T.T waaaa can't believe that it will end soon Author-nim~ iwantmoree Fighting~!!! \(^O^)/
JDarambles
#5
Chapter 8: Ohmygod!!! Kris being the demon surprised the heck outta me. Like whoa! didn't expect that. Can we like take Kai and make a million clones out of him he is just such a fcking DREAM. They are relationshipgoals thats for sure. Please be strong you two lovelies. Welcome back and thank you so so much! ^-^
cottonmouth95 #6
Chapter 8: Ahck! It's krisseu?? Lol! Why cant i visualize that?! (^_^) thank goodness Kai's not dead tho.. I think Dara made pact with the demon tho.. OTL #KAIDARA
AeriSphnx
#7
Chapter 8: Oooooh so it was Kris!!!! Waaaah!
dara-ish
#8
Chapter 7: no please nooooooooooooooooo!!
minnsong
#9
Chapter 7: No no no~ ;; Kaaaaaaaai!!! Huhu. What happened, authornim? :( It’s so sad. I hope it isn’t real. :( Poor Darong...

Thank you authornim for this update!! ❤️
chiruka
#10
Chapter 7: Omo! waaaaaaaaaaaa :O what did just happened to Kai? it's just hallucination of Dara right Author-nim? waaaaaaaaa i want to know wae so short Author-nim~