A thrilling dark romance involving two ill-fated lovers who are up against the world to protect each other from the deception, hate and lost memories they are thrown.
Chapter 5: This story is unique and the background story is cool too, with that planets name and such. This is my only suggestion and advice though, I'm not very fond of your writing style—like the space before and after the characters' statements, like it needs to be separated for readers not to confuse on how to read then comprehend the meaning. I'm not trying to be mean or sound mean (I'm sorry if did) but I guess you should fix it to make the readers understand. (Sorry for any grammatical errors here, English's not my first language hehe) All in all, it's pretty cool. I love how Nana transformed and I think it's necessary for girls to be powerful — it's hot. lol.
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