entwine our fingers and listen to my heartbeat

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Description

It isn't friendship; it's beyond that. It hasn't quite reached love, but it's not far off. In fact, just one step would be enough to fill the gap of grey.


entwine our fingers and listen to my heartbeat

length; one-shot

pairing; kooksoo (jongkook x kwangsoo)

genre; angst, romance, drama(ish)

rating; nc15

an; my kooksoo feels are blooming from watching too much rm, and i have no where but here to post it lol

Foreword

“What would you do, if…the man you love for years is about to be in a serious relationship? Do I fight for it or do I give up when I haven't even started?” 

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_Fireflies_ #1
Chapter 1: I made an account just so I could read the rest of this. It was amazing and heart rendering and beautiful and made me cry a little.
My favourite scene had to be when JK saw Kwangsoo sitting on the rooftop. It has such a raw beauty to it and I think what elicited the most feelings from me.
I especially liked how you spread the progress of their relationship over a long time as some writers rush it a bit (not that I usually mind), bit in doing so you managed to put in a great deal more feelings. So like 100/10 :)
HunHan623
#2
Chapter 1: I've been watching so much Running Man that the KookSoo feels were getting out of control, this was absolutely perfect! I love how they're all so friendly after the show, because they're more than friends, they're family. Also, Ji Hyo would definitely do that, YES! Thank you for writing this, author-nim, it was just what I wanted to read! <3
hajarsyaimaa #3
Chapter 1: this story is so cute and lovely and youre one of my fav author !!! it's so hard to find kooksoo fanfics recent..so i always reread your fanfics like everyday ? lol i usually like it tbh ... so can i ask you a favor ? can you continuing this story how their relationship goes on and there will something happen on them..:just create it i would obviously read it ! promise !!!! kooksoo for life !!
kookiemonsterx
#4
Chapter 1: I remember reading this and my heart ached for KwangSoo. Pleaseeeeeee write more! You're an amazing writer.
Maya_Desires
#5
I love the bromance of kooksoo, it's amazing. I find myself wishing if I can find a love as good as their bromance lol. Your story was amazing, and really touched my heart. Love your writing. I was immersed in the story, when normally I am not as into the romantic side of this ship.
Megami284 #6
Chapter 1: I love this story and I felt for the characters. It was very believable. Please continue to write Kooksoo stories. There needs to be more Kooksoo stories and authors.
Chiseichii
#7
Chapter 1: You're... awesome man!
My parents kept on asking me why the hell am I crying, and the reason for that was because of your story T_T
I really love KookSoo, and I ship them SOOOOOOOOOO Much. I once thought of creating a fanfic for them, but man, you beat me to it. But as I read your story, I had an inspiration.
It was actually rare for me to get inspired in some stories, believe me. But your story of KookSoo changed it all.
Now, I want to make a story for them too.THANK GOD I READ YOUR STORY.

Can I ask a favor? Can you make more KookSoo stories? You're a great author, I swear.
Kooksoo333 #8
Chapter 1: I cried reading this I love it
but I was so excited to read more detail about their relationship and hoped you kept the slow development style going throughout the end and for jk confession to be more epic

Thank you for writing and posting this there's not much good Angust kooksoo fanfic around and this one is amazing and made me in tears
spadenoace #9
Chapter 1: (last bit)
I wanted to punch JK because he’s being an absolute jerk but then he’s so earnest about it even though he’s really fooling himself and gods- the Sukjin and JK revelation is really the cold harsh truth and poor Geung Young, she is such a sweetie but he redeems himself eventually thankfully- I think that waiting 5 hours despite the cold is something so Jongkook to do because he could be so stubborn with the things he’s determined to do.
And it’s a nice change that he’s learning from the younger, especially because as an older generation JK might still hold the traditional beliefs and the warmth that Gwangsoo teaches him that it’s simply love and that it is universal is simply beautiful.
Towards the it end, it felt a little rushed- told in flashbacks (and I do love Geun Young for not holding it against him) more than the details and slow development of things that happened for the most of the story (and I do wish I saw Jihyo giving another talk to Jongkook like the noona she is, like to never hurt GwangSoo again or else because I love Jongkook and Jihyo’s relationship too) but you know what else is there? I can only think that when they reach the rest of their lives together, the parts between the worst of it and the then now can pass by in a blur-

thank you for writing this, I really loved every bit of it! ^^
spadenoace #10
Chapter 1: (cont.) Oh man that kiss scene- it’s beautifully written and the extra note of “lovely” makes my heart want to break into a thousand pieces because GS is so resigned about it, and committing it to memory is the only thing he could do. And while I totally agree with JH on dealing with JK (and the way she looks out for GS is so adorable and noona-like) and I can’t imagine anyone else that would confront the commander like that, sadly I understand JK’s POV too because, that is a possible initial reaction to something like this (I had a similar although not as violent reaction)

Jihyo’s such a goddamn queen when it comes to sticking out for other people - I could feel her sadness at her rapid-fire questions and storming in, and really she spared no words, and oh gods that last lines freaking slayed me, in all coldness and anger wow. I really feel like especially for your dialogue that each word is carefully chosen for maximum effect and just wow.

[He wasn’t used to the weight] cue my heart breaking, sitting like the lonely cans of beer that GwangSoo drank and
drunken GwangSooo almost brought me to tears with the words just heaving from his heart and soul and drunken painfully truthful rambling-
[He looked down at JOngkook, and smiled beautifully, breathtakingly] and I can just imagine it too, that warmth and sadness all into one and I’m gonna cry