#01The Fallen

The Carnifex
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Chapter One | The Fallen

He was breathless after running up the staircase leading to the rooftop. He kept on looking behind him hoping to lose her sight of him.

He never wanted this. He never wanted to kill those people. He knew he was not himself during those times, and if he could only get away from the menace he’d brought to himself, he would’ve done it the first time he realized he’d be trapped inside this curse. But he always trusted her. He always did.

He found a perfect hiding place. Behind a broken exhaust, he sat with his knees to his chest. Sweat all over his body, he was trembling so hard. He somehow knew it’ll be his last day if he cannot get rid of the shadow. He couldn’t hear the distant noise of their school grounds. It was supposed to be the enrolment for the next school year, but for him, it would just be another months of torture from the dark spell of death. The other working exhausts were too loud for him to hear a door creek.

Few seconds later, he noticed he could hear them. Silence buzzed into his ears and he looked around, even peaked behind to see if she had already caught up. A familiar cold began to creep up inside him, this time, he was sure she’s already there. As he faced front again, he saw her, standing few yards away.

He stood up slowly and shakily. Her face was pale as it had always been. Despite the blank expression she had, every time Choi Jong Hun looks at those eyes, he h

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Keycolight #1
Chapter 4: kimiko's so weird. is she possessed by different ghosts? because she changes every time she meets sehun. and it makes me even sure that she killed all her friends.
was that ghost? did sehun see a ghost? wait the genre's not horror right? so it shouln't be a ghost.
Keycolight #2
Chapter 3: okaaay... so that necklace's kimiko's right? and there's something wrong with that necklace. now that sehun's blood got on that thing, does it mean he's officially the next target? and what did she mean by she's glad that he got transfered there?
wow this girl is really something. well, chanyeol too haha. or his noona girlfriend?
pawlinne17
#3
Chapter 5: Why?
nanjatte...
omaya.. reading this after dreaming about chanyeol.. the stiches on his face #images .. inspired by his Joker make up.. SUGEEE! jal haesseo dongsaeng-ah.. saranghing !!! sugo haesseo! fighting!
Whuut da.. sino yang babaeng yan?? (singing)that should be me...hearing you laugh... that should be me.. holding your hand... pati kna indi ko sure sang lyrics.
Keycolight #4
Chapter 2: i'm so nad at guessing but i think they had played something before. something with a curse? and this yukimura girl seems suspicious. did she kill her friends? is she possessed? poor sehun, he looks confused with all that happening in the school. and yukimura girl started to give him a bad signal. but wait, was that necklace hers? what did she do there when sehun climbed up the bridge?
hmm... suspicious...
Keycolight #5
Chapter 1: i love the way you wrrite this fic. it's easy to understand and neat. and it doesn't look cheap either. this is the 3rd gore fic i've read. and i'm sure it'll be good. i wonder why you don't get many subscribers. your story is so nice!
melover
#6
Chapter 5: Its night here so i couldn't read it like the scaredy cat i am butttt long time no see! Hi! How have you been?
Syirahpopo #7
Chapter 3: Wow, you're such a great author ! i really love this story ! i could feel something creepy gonna happen next . Hahaha . update soon author-nim ! i'm waiting 4 u ~
melover
#8
Chapter 4: OH MY GOD! *goes and hides in my blanket* that was so scary in the end i'm shivering...i shouldn't have read this at night when i knew u wud get scared but i couldn't control myself and just read it! It was scaryyyyyyyyy...huhuhuhu..authornim i demand a hug! Keke but to be honest i like that little kai and sehun moment.. I'm their fan..well kinda! I'll explain when u reply!
melover
#9
Chapter 3: Helllloooo creepyyyy~~ omg i was waiting for something dangerous to happen in every line...but it didn't for now..but boy is that girl creepy i get weird vibes from her..but i think that is how it's supposed to be ryt? Then you r doing a good job. .i like sehun...the mystery of the necklace...some skinship kyaaaaaa!! Duguen duguen~ well i liked it! Update soon!!!
ubyanne22 #10
Chapter 3: wow !!!!!!! i love this story