Nothing is better than you

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A story of two extraordinary people falling in love with each other.

Foreword

Hehe, this is my first fanfic... hope you enjoy it XD

 

 

 

Please don't be good to me - Kim Jong Kook

No matter what, I will still love you for you - Song Ji Hyo

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sa_1109 #1
Chapter 8: Dear author, it'd be great if you can continue this story ... Please come back soon .....................
Mithani
#2
any update ?:(
mnmatiim #3
Chapter 8: so all this while that wasnt the story? :O
spadenoace #4
Chapter 5: I was so ready for Jaesuks revenge so I was surprised at his fondness for the emerging couple. Is he ever going to get his revenge or?-

But here we see your typical spartace action you know holding onto each other while laughing and whatnot! How sweet~ If I can say something though that scene might have worked better if it wasn't so detailed about the two of them being oblivious of their actions. Oblivious is fine but to say it outright they are is underestimating us spartacers of their would be natural skinship no?
Im actually enjoying this more as a slice of life/series of one shots so far because it seems to jump from place to place. I do hope you'll continue the story!
spadenoace #5
Chapter 3: Damn Jongkook makes his appearance - I couldsee his inner Coach Kook personality shining through keke
Personally I would like them to have some level of maturity as they are all working adults even if staff is short you know? And considering this is set in Korea (since youre keeping the honorifics here) there is absolutely no way a new worker in a subordinate position would be so outright blunt (borderline rude ) to his boss - the rest of the members are okay though JK ia older than them~
Hm if Jongkook was confronting Jaesuk for his boss not working it would be more subtle you know? You said something about his natural charisma + well fit body so you definitely can use that to convey JKs feelings so perhaps rather than looking obviously annoyed JK would probably have a more neutral expression.. I cant exactly think of how JK would have told JS to stop watching cat videos- maybe by saying something along the lines of almost questioning his authority and giving him more work because JK needed "help"?
I do like the comedic aspect though- our RM cast here seems like your typical rom com band of friends at work keke and I do wonder what sort of revenge Jaesuk is planning. ..
spadenoace #6
Chapter 2: Jongkook strikes me a little odd here - for someone who seems to have their life together I means he's doing okay just working out with no job? And he got the date mixed up (Im thinking hes a bit of a scatterbrain here since he got the schedule mixed up and it wasnt particularly a busy day..)
Also it is just casually bumping into even a pretty girl hm.. would he blush at that? I could see where this is going tho ~
Nakatsukie #7
Chapter 5: hahaa.. lol i like your story coz it's soooooo funny.. what a naughty jong kook.
Zhee2014 #8
Chapter 3: Interesting! Keep on writing.. :)
Zhee2014 #9
Chapter 1: Interesting! Albeit too short... haha
And love the stern Yoo Jae Suk! Oh boy...
spadenoace #10
Chapter 1: I think it's a little too early to tell (although I have to wonder how you have a muscular voice?) but I like this so far! ^^