Irony

Description

Eli and Kevin were happy together. Once things got difficult, Eli left, leaving Kevin in ruins. TW: Suicide, depression

Foreword

 

Hi everyone! 

I initially used this idea for a story as my free-write piece fo my British Literature class application a few years back. I discovered it a few months, and decided to re-write it. Upon stumbling on it again, I decided to add a sequel due to all the requests. Please comment and let me know what you think and what can be improved upon, I always want to hear how I can better my writing.

-Riley

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Minchiccino #1
Chapter 2: i cried really bad on chapter 2 absolutely love this story so sad T^T
rumourhasit12 #2
Chapter 2: Omg Eli POV! And they met! YAAAAAY! (Well I think they met) thank you for the sequel authornim! Thank yoi for telling us Eli's side :D and from what I understood at the end they'll be together <3 (i hope i'm not wrong)
asanoyahhs #3
Chapter 1: can you do an eli pov????? please?
JayJaeYoo #4
Chapter 1: That wow ! amazingly written ! like really
and maybe in my eyes the irony was that Eli demanded that kevin stays with him the moment kevin was dying

i am super curious what Elis thought were at this moment
rumourhasit12 #5
Chapter 1: Awwh Kevin :(( great story authornim! I hope you write more stories like this! -keric voice- pretty please?
KilaKila #6
Chapter 1: I loved how your wrote your story, very beautiful !
But so sad ;;
MoonShine89 #7
This is a really good story. I like it. Hope you can write more stories like this one.
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