My Love from another Planet

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Sequel to :

You who came from the Stars, which you can view here --> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/802228/

This story picks up some time in the future from where we left off in the previous story [I plan on writing a proper summary - whereby I'll edit this section - until then, bear with what I have written]

Same characters but just to freshen up your memories (and introduce to those who haven't had the chance to read the first story), here goes: 

Characters: 

Starring EXO as hot aliens from outer space who left their perfectly good planet in the galaxy, invaded Earth and claimed it as their own territory. Greedy bastards.Everyone in this story has an associated theme around which I build the story – it'll be obvious when you read it but just in case, I'll write it down:

Luhan: Everything that can go wrong... will (Protagonist of our previous story)

Suho: Happy sailing all the way except when things get interesting.(He got the girl but is still gonna make appearances)

Xiumin: Joyful misunderstandings (and a dark past which is explored in detail here - sort of protagonist)

Sehun: Hate at first fight.(Protagonist for this story)

Kai: Unrequited feelings and forever alone… *sniffs* (he's also a y beast but that's Luhan's fault hehe) - I'm afraid his situation didn't change much.. I LOVE YOU BB T_T)

D.O: Tragedy and loss… *sniffs again* (I'll just end up putting these two together #Kaisoo5ever... okay maybe not but my heart is out for these two - I'm sorry) 

Tao: Peter Pan – the boy who refused to grow up (but in the end, was forced to... I hope you guys see the change in him :D)

Lay: Who's the gayest of 'em all? (I can't believe I did that to my bias!!!) - Oblivious as hell, don't you know what you do to those around you?

Chen: Sassiness redefined - that holds true despite the events that take place here

Baekhyun: Sheer awesomeness (What can I say? He's gangster as hell)

Chanyeol: Still can't use his powers (Kris's fault, okay?)

Kris: Tragedy (I TRULY AM SORRY)

Original characters who make me wonder what the hell I'm writing but still… it's all for the story, so bear with their silliness. OC names:

Mei: Luhan's mate and the heroine of our previous story (still takes a sizable portion of the story even though I said I won't let her - what can I say? she's my sister :/)

Tiffany (nothing to do with SNSD): Admit it, y'all wanna see her with Sehun :3

Lily: Has something going on with Xiumin - I think this story is one of the more serious subplots I have - I hope you'll enjoy how it goes

Angel: Suho's perfect mate (and the cutest girl ever, I wanna squish her) complements his cheesiness in a way no one else can <3

Raina: Crazy... and a hardcore Lay fangirl (which makes me think I'm projecting myself into her but we'll see where we go with her)

Kyra: D.O... I'm sorry T_T

Evil (yes that is his name)  - blatantly unoriginal name taken from MAMA narration - EVIL of Red Forces - a cunning enemy

Killer (Kira from Death Note... or someone like that): One of Evil's more intelligent minions

 

Cameos: Minho ( yeah Shinee), Matt and Merissa (an OC's OC parents), Karen (Kris's mate), Bangtan Boys, especially Rap Monster, Taemin (not once mentioned by name and I hope his stans will forgive me) PSY (again, not mentioned by name but you'll recognize him) and YOURS TRULY, MUA :D (Maybe I'll offer karma points for those who recognize me hehe)

My apologies in advance for not giving all members equal screen time – I did my best to put them all in the story. There are several arcs to the story and the main characters will change according to that, so those who didn’t get enough space here will be compensated later on, don't worry.

Notable Places:

Oulphesden – where Exo lives (another blatant wordplay on Wolves' Den - geurue oulf, nega oulf... ring a bell?)

Heifercourt – only named for reference sake 

Cabalix – will feature prominently here

Jaz – where Killer is going crazy doing his thing (another country)

The Black Pearl: Xiumin's second shop – a coffee café – is bigger and is currently under renovation as Xiumin aims to make it the best coffee shop in town (or rather, he relies on Lily).The first floor of this place is an entire suite, equipped with a kitchenette and a bathroom and living room and like that. A favorite hangout for the Legends and their mates alike :3

University: A huge place that has different departments, schools and campuses dedicated to almost any field that suits my fancy, with the tendency of providing adequate hiding spots in near vicinity whenever required (sort of like in Hogwarts). Important places inside the university are the numerous campus buildings, the music and performance school, the girls hostel (there's a boys hostel as well but that’s presently irrelevant) and the --- Park, a great spot with plenty of shaded alcoves and stuff.

The classes, projects and other practical stuff taking place in the story is the result of my whims, do not – I repeat, do not – expect it to be realistic.

Headquarters (HQ): The second HQ, introduced towards the end of the previous story.

Is a place that is more suited to the rising need for privacy within the pack. It's hard enough that they basically announce it to the pack when they're getting cozy with their girls and so, Suho, being the good, caring and somewhat (hey, he's a guy, he'd like to get in her pants) leader that he is, finds them a place that will give them some measure of privacy (all the rooms are soundproofed, not that they know it).  

Special Thanks:

To my sister who insisted I write her a Luhan x Reader fic and I gave her this (poor girl). She's responsible, not only for pushing me when I got too lazy – which was more often than I care to think about – but also served as the inspiration for both Mei and Tiffany.

And also to everyone who is reading this story. I know there are a lot of plot holes and unexplained hints in this story as well but trust me, I'll tie all the strings together to explain it :3 I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Happy reading!   

EXTRA SPECIAL THANKS

To floras for the lovely poster and background. I know its kind of serious but I felt that it suited the overall tone and theme of this story. 

 

Oh and in case you guys wanna check out my other story of associated bonus scenes: 

EXO JOURNAL: A VOYAGE THROUGH THE GALAXY 

Yes, more craziness. Do read the bonus scenes... they're bascially written for comic and stress relief... plus to explore just how crazy I can go :) Anyway do,  comment on that as well. 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/908323/exo-journal-a-voyage-through-the-galaxy-exo

Okay then, Goodbye :3

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chasing_daydreams #1
Just, let me say that you have ruined my life with these two books. You put so much detail that my heart literally hurts from it. The tragedy after tragety made it unpredictable yet at the same time also somewhat predictable enough to keep you at the edge of your seat. I love the backstories and subplots you have included in this....ugh. Its perfect and I'm dead
corellana36 #2
Chapter 97: Bruh. I can't believe this, like i am in a state of shock. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. Y u do tis? ;_;
Silencedshadow #3
Chapter 97: This made me tear up a bit. I knew things were going to be bad, and I suspected Chen will come back, but I never expected someone else to die. I want Luhan to come back. And Xiumin to survive. And Kyra and Kris and Lay, and everyone else who's dying.
But I am glad that Baekhyun finally found his light. :))
His self hatred thoughts made me sad though. He's probably not going to get over this trauma anytime soon, and the nightmares and self guilt and self hatred will haunt him for a while even if he manages to save the day.
I'm incredibly happy for Chen though. :D welcome back, you have been missed. :)

When is the next one comming? :)) I'm sorry, I know you just finished this one, but with the ending you left us with, I'm itching to know what's happening with everyone.
Silencedshadow #4
Chapter 96: Well, Baekhyun's thoughts still manage to be funny even in the middle of slaughtering war. I'm talking about the ones he had about Lay when he went towards Kris. That made me smile for a little while.
But I'm getting depressed now thinking about Luhan deciding to sacrifice his life like that to save everyone. And maybe he could have saved himself if Mei had stayed indoors. If he dies, I'm holding her responsible for this. I don't want Luhan to die. :(

Who's going to help them if Lay is also on the verge of death? Not like he could do much with his lack of powers, but still... And DO. I'm kind of pissed with him. Everyone is fighting for their lives and he decided give up on everyone because he's broken hearted. I'm pretty sure he could still fight. And then there's Baekhyun who concludes their last hope, the sun, has fallen.
I'm blaming Kyra. And Mei. And DO. And Baekhyun for being stupid.
I'm scared to go to the next chapter. :(
Babbie #5
Chapter 97: ......... ...... ........ make Tao go bak in time to change things...please...if only krya didn't show up DO could've fought.....I was thinking Baek would be the sun bc he's light but....everyone dead lays dead....no one can be healed...make Raina kiss Tao so he gain more power to time travel......is there gonna be a last book...what is Chen gonna do now...by himself vs evil if them all couldn't take them down how can Chen do that alone..is everyone dead? Or just Luhan,xiumin, lay, kris...ur sister May might get u for killing luhan lol
Silencedshadow #6
Chapter 95: What in the WORLD was Baekhyun doing with a fruit knife in his pocket when he decided to go to war with the abyss? I love him. He should have more confidence in himself, but he is a bit dense. He just stated how his powers were the powers of Suns combined, yet he doesn't seem to connect the dots that lead to him. Someone give him a hug. And a slap over his head.

I also didn't expect Xiumin to be the first to fall, but he had been pretty wounded before the fight started so I guess that didn't help. It seems he's in a very bad condition. What are they going to do without Lay's powers? Kyra, Xiumin, Kai, I'm not even taking into consideration Suho, Chanyeol and Sehun. And I'm close to believe Kris might be next because Baekhyun seems to put too much faith in him. And he apparently jinxed it too.

I hope Tao stays safe because he needs to keep everyone frozen in time, but at this rate, he might be the only one standing. And Baekhyun of course.
This would be a good opportunity for him to explode with power and kill all Abbies in a second.

The scene with Suho being smashed to the ground by that thing, reminded me of the scene from the Avangers, when Hulk smashed Loki to the ground. That was probably one of the funniest things in the movie. Not so much in the story or real life, because even one smash can break all your bones or kill you. So ouch.

So, is Evil unable to supress DO's powers, or did it happen because he went nuts for his love? The power of love is winning all evil. The force of will, and so on.

So, what helped DO escape the abyss? At first I thought it would be Chen, because only Chen could know what he was thinking at that moment, which was dying. Then I thought it would be the evil because he wanted him to see the death ok Kyra, but evil can't really be in 2 places at once, can he? And the thing that pushed him fought with the Abbies that were trailing DO. Now, why would evil do that? I'm pretty sure he's master and Lord of the abyss.
Silencedshadow #7
Chapter 94: Lay and Chanyeol seemed to enjoy the fight like little kids playing computer games. Even the girls, except Lily and Angel, seemed to enjoy it. Crazy girls for crazy legends. :))

I knew Kyra would do something stupid like going back to the HQ by herself. These girls never learn. I really really hope she won't die, because that would be...tragic.
And DO will go crazy-er than he already is and will probably cause the end of the world.
Speaking of DO. How in the world did he manage to get out of the abyss by himself? Or was it evil who brought him there just to see her die? That is quite evil even for evil. Never mind, I saw it now. Did he do it on purpose; or was he simply being followed by DO?

What shocked me the most was DO singing while cooking. What? Seriously, What?!?!?

Of course Baekhyun wouldn't think the answer is light. Of course he would think it's something with distructive power, like fire. They all seem to forget that the only one that managed to hurt Evil was Lay, when ironically, he was trying to heal him. I can see a great future for Baekhyun. ;) he is light after all. :D

I wonder what more can go wrong from this point forward.
Babbie #8
Chapter 94: :'(.......
corellana36 #9
Chapter 93: This is Great! I laughed at sehun's commentary on Tao's fears and baek getting patched up (Bc lets be honest we can all hear his Haunted House screams when they are fixing the wounds) XD But wow this is a really nice story! lets see what happens next....
Silencedshadow #10
Chapter 93: This chapter was strangely funny.
I shouldn't have laughed at Tao's fears, or at Baekhyun being patched up by Suho, but I did, in my mind. I'm so evil. Anyway, what was Baekhyun's fear? I think he was the only one that didn't see anything. Is it because he's the true master of illusions, and he can't be tricked like the rest of them? He was pretty cool finding all the secret passages and keeping everyone safe away from the dark corridors.

I'm glad Kris joined them. Finally.
Xiumin must be incredibly restless and frustrated for not sensing Lily through a mate link to know she's safe.

And just when I thought Suho would be the mature one, he goes and argues with Luhan and Sehun about who's mate worries more.

So...Tao actually fears Raina will leave him for Lay. Does he have a crush on her yet? Or is it just the fear of being rejected by his mate?

I wonder how DO's doing alone in the abyss, surrounded by dark creatures.
I also wonder what's going through Kyra's mind now that she knows that Kai is late to get her. What will she do? Go back by herself or stay there until Kai appears? Maybe call Raina? I do tend to forget sometimes that they have cellphones.
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