List of Changes

ICE: Thaw the Frozen Heart [EDITING]

I'm not done editing yet, but since I'm going to post the next chapter VERY SOON anyway, here are the tinsy winsy bit changes I plan but haven't edited:

1. Kris' job title is no longer "Chairman" but "CEO".
I didn't research that far when I wrote this 5 years ago. And now when I do, I realize that it's a bit of a stretch that a 21 year-old became a chairman of a big company even if it's built by his own family. There has to be a stepping stone still, Aina! lol

2. Their marriage is more of an on-paper marriage. Not a contract though. Just that they never had an actual wedding celebration, which I never explicitly mentioned but always hinted at. So, no vows from them! I just suddenly thought Yeojin's mother wouldn't so easily give her precious daughter's hand in marriage even to someone they knew really well. And then throw a wedding? I now can't imagine it. Realistically speaking, her mom would have been a bit hesitant even at the start. But I imagine she would give in because they're just going to register the marriage, and she would see how it goes from there.  Also, a wedding sounds ridiculous especially given the circumstances they were in when Kris' father asked them to marry. Their marriage is totally legal and real though.

3. Kris' dream of wanting to be a jewelry designer would be hinted earlier.
I've planned for him to have that dream since the start, but I just realized I never actually hinted at it until that one time Kris and Yeojin were having a date and she asked him what his dream was before he was forced to take on the role of a chairman (now CEO lol).

4. Yeojin's panic attacks are actually anxiety attacks. Not that saying that anxiety attacks should be treated lightly, but I found out that panic attacks aren't the same as anxiety attacks. Panic attack is more severe, abrupt, and sudden while anxiety attack has range from mild to severe. And anxiety attacks usually follows after a trigger which suits Yeojin's case more. I'm just putting this out here to apologize for my ignorance and lack of research to anyone suffering any of these attacks. Ironically, I wouldn't have found out about the differences if I didn't experience it myself. (Yes, I started realizing that I sometimes experience anxiety attacks. Don't worry though mine is very very mild.)

Those will be the tinsy winsy but important changes that might affect how you view the plot as a whole!

Other planned minor changes will be some of the conversations. I cringed so hard at some conversations and curse at some other that are too complicated or doesn't make sense. Forgive this author for putting you through all those lines for years.

Anyway, thank you for being so patient with me! So thankful for everyone here! Love you all! And see you on the next chapter very soon!

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krisxoxo23
#1
Chapter 82: Missed the story, been few years already, hoping there'll be an update 😭😭😭
Emily345 #2
Chapter 82: Ohh how I miss this story... ?
Will you be updating again ??
2407briana #3
Chapter 82: Whoa whoa whoa I was not prepared for that
mznary #4
Chapter 82: WHAT?!! NOOOO NOO! Yifannnnn!!
miyoonji #5
Chapter 82: So, who is Yeojin going to choose?
tutialawiyah #6
Chapter 82: I was thinking Kris want to step down from his position to protect Yeojin. But what now? Is he seriously wanna give up on everything?? Cmon, atleast you should have one whether it's yeojin or your company T.T
gogogirl26 #7
Chapter 82: Aishhhh.. kris :(
chichiba #8
Chapter 82: Kris is ready to let Yeojin go... im sad?
chonanay
#9
Chapter 82: :'((
Shinhye-ssi
#10
Chapter 82: Are they breaking up?