Chapter 7: this is so beautiful

Chapter 7: Wow I love the way you write, I like the plot and how it seems so real.. Thanks, and I'll be looking for your other works! =)

Chapter 7: I love love love love LOVE this chapter, this ending, oh my god it's so AMAZINGLY GOOD *curses in rainbows* We've come to the end of my comment takeover with this absolutely gorgeous final chapter, which, out of everything, I just come back to over and over again. ARGH it both pains me and floods me with love~ It's wonderful and perfect, every single word. From Chorong believing she loves Bomi more than Bomi loves her, Bomi being a free spirit (big yes), being afraid to love, better to let go, how everyone is worried, and then comes Bomi. There she sits, observant and listening, her sentence in caps made me giggle too (that's so like her hahaha). God, the way she responds simply to Chorong's slip of the tongue after everything that's been said, "I love you too" to "I will always, always love you back" !!! And it keeps going. They can be together now and keep it a secret awww I feel so happy for Chorong~ the depiction of the love they feel here is so unbelievably simple and fantastic *sobs* And the ending is damn impactful! That description and then "Bomi had never looked more gorgeous" *sighs dreamily* This is what a mic drop in a fluff fic would sound like. Fcking BOOM.

I'm IN LOVE with the shortness and sweetness of this story. This is my favourite ending ever, top of the top. Never has an ending of a story for me been so impactful like this one! Satisfying endings are abundant yes, but honey this one is MORE than just satisfying. It's a mega squeal factor. I can't even- I don't know. This is my inspiration and my love.

Chapter 6: This one never fails to make me squee too UGH so good. The description of the concert, the feelings, the fans, it set the scene so well. The way the chapter ended with a kiss, "much like the first time they kissed" is completely right, there's a parallel there with that chapter and I love it. Goshh it's so calm, peaceful and sweet, in the night in the car, when everyone is asleep, two members' secret desire for a kiss after strategically avoiding and resisting interactions in front of the hundreds of fans at the concert. I drop my uwus. Bomi's whisper at the end always has me in pure and utter joy.

Chapter 5: I've been writing a chobom fic based off of Apink's real life activities and this story is one of my inspirations to write better! I just really look up to this, how sweet and real it is. This chapter is where my fic gets similar because we're both following the schedule closely. I should say, when it came to the five of them going to China, I ended up using Nacho as seatmates for my own reasons because I needed Naeun's character there (Nacho didn't sit together that flight, I'm pretty sure), but this was where the idea sprung from. I remembered this scene with Nacho, but for the longest time I didn't know what fic it came from... and it was here! I fell in love with this fic all over again when I found out hehe. "Look, you like Eunji, I like Bomi" was the part that stuck to memory because of how simple and direct it was.

Chapter 4: Right when I love one chapter, the next one comes and does it even better! I can imagine Bomi zoning out in the mirror haha. Starting from Namjoo who I relate to in this instance of chobom excitement~ how "Bomi's slim fingers wrapped around Chorong's hand on the cup" was so smooooth, oh man and "Chorong whose face flushed slightly at the contact" UWU. Bomi calling the members as the 2nd eldest.. But the power of the kissing scenes in this fic, I really feel it. Every moment is important between them and that's described so beautifully.

Chapter 3: The maknaes uwu I seriously love the observant Namjoo. Also that Chobom eye contact. "Chorong looked away so quickly, that Bomi felt a little insulted." <-- You have no idea how much I love this line, it matches the underlying feels that there could be something more to the relationship now, especially after that interview where Chorong had to nudge Bomi to stop staring asdfsafdas. This is precious. And pretend-whispering just to kiss Chorong's cheek, gosh Yoon Bomi, that action is so sweet! I applaud authornim how you came up with that, because it makes me squee~

Chapter 2: AHHH I love this moment so much >.< the reciprocation, the feels, the simplicity, that kiss!! “Gentle and soft” oomph I’m in love~ how on earth? It’s fluffy, it’s calm, there’s no angst or drama, and the feelings are developing slowly there in both of them, but Chorong, my oh my, the way it ended in a lovely surprise.. this was so wholesome uwu

Chapter 1: Chorong's thoughts were ugh perfect, that cold depressive side, it was depicted so well >-< having those wandering thoughts as she's washing the dishes makes it feel more sad, mundane, and real. And then Bomi, argh, her changing disposition, the pressure of variety. These qualities are touched upon in just a matter of sentences and it blows me away how simple and powerful it is, these are things they definitely dealt with.
And the innocence and sweetness in Bomi's kisses, the way she views Chorong, the imagery was just beautiful wow. "The dim light from the television illuminated Chorong's perfect jawline" for instance. This is so well-written uwu

Chapter 7: I need to say how badly in love with this story I am, seriously. It is short and well-crafted, and is one of the absolute best and cutest depiction of real life chobom. It is my personal favourite in that category, partially because it's set in early 2015 so the army and the concert is involved, but mainly because of all the fictional elements weaved into a realistic life. The kisses and how almost nonchalant it started brought me unbelievable joy. Namjoo's speculations. Chorong's confession, which would make their relationship more clear. God! People don't talk about this fic enough!! I have so many things to say and will continue to share my love for this fic cos I want to, so perhaps I'll have more to say coming back in the future, if I have time. Dear lovely story, stay where you are and don't go anywhere. I cherish you deeply.