The Chalk Child [Oneshot]

Description

It's a cute story, actually. For his whole 19-year life Hyukjae has been desperately dependant on his drawn friend. What he doesn't know that there is someone exactly like him. After such a long period of sadness, loneliness and the only comfort of a single chalk, what happens is quite unbelievable.

Foreword

 

"This has to be a trick. Or a dream, at least." Hyukjae told himself more than anything.

"Nope."

"Then why do you talk like you know everything?"

"I'm just as confused as you."

Yeah, utter confusion, that's what it was.

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The Chalk Child by slicksilver
Length: Oneshot
Genre: Fluff, romance, AU
Pairing: EunHae
Word count: 2,8k
A/N: This was the cause of a sudden outburst of inspiration at 2 am.. Enjoy the fluffiness for a change!

PS. I might do a sequel to this and edit the 1st chapter in the future... but it depends on you all if you want it.

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the_fictitious
#1
Chapter 1: Ahhh memory manip
Kethryveris
#2
Chapter 1: Tellement original, ça mérite une suite.
TripleS_SuMyat
#3
Chapter 1: this is sooooo good. why do i find this only now. TT
PURPLEDREAM_girl #4
Chapter 1: This is awesome... Need more ~~~
hyukflavor
#5
Chapter 1: I thought it was going to had some of fantasy or something xD well, I didn't take a look on the tags. but it was indeed good, but why hyukjae forget about donghae? did hyukjae's parents really did it? owh, so hyukjae drawn someone who he miss or important to him even without have any memories of him. wow, even though his memories can remember donghae but somehow deep in his mind still remember of his features and anything. though, he just thought that it was just an imaginary friend of him.
SnowyK
#6
Chapter 1: I thought it was supernatural/reincarnation right up to the point Donghae said they knew each other as kids but then he moved away and Hyukjae's parents must've said he wasn't real XD You really had me going! I loved the imagery in this one and that the other stuck out to them for so many years, and that they remembered each other the same way. Great job!
yolohyuk
#7
Chapter 1: OH MY THIS IS SO SAD TAT;;;
how can hyukjae's parent act like donghae was only hyukjae's imaginary friend when the truth he's real and was there before he left DD8 hyukjae won't think himself as a crazy person if they told him, omg poor little hyukjae cries thank goodness donghae is into graffiti as well so they can meet! imagine if donghae was into playstation instead or football, hurl I don't even want to imagine what's going to happen ;w; will there any sequel for this?? kinda anticipating what hyukjae's parents' excuses hehe thanks for sharing~
Amaaya
#8
Chapter 1: This is honestly adorable omg
I thought Hyukjae would just end up having an imaginary friend forever that was the fruit of his loneliness and imagination, I really thought that, but it turned out so well.
I'm anGRY at hyukjae's parents because he thought he was kinda crazy because of them but I also kimda understand.
And oh god the meeting. You can just feel the sparkles, the completely irrational, almost surreal way they had of missing each other, but still, it's true, it's what they felt and I'd almost want to ask "did you ever think about a sequel?" But a one shot is meant to stay a one shot I guess.
A M A Z I N G. Thank you for writing it~
bitterkitty
#9
Awww!!! So freakin cute!! And there are some really great lines too, very memorable. I agree with the other commenters asking for a sequel... *hopeful*