on Period II

October 20, 2014

I understand the problems with after, but in all honesty (apart from copying 50 shades) there isn't anything wrong with the period scene. Periods are natural, if you're grossed out by periods you're too immature to be reading ANY fanfiction. (Although nobody should read crap that glorifies abusive relationships.)

20 October 2014

I’m very mature for my age, and there are people older than me and they’re very mature and they agree that the period scene was horrendus and disgusting. I don’t give a red , blue or yellow the period scene was so distasting and so ed up to write about

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Reddishskies #1 May 26, 2015 05:08:56

Chapter 60: Ive seen this.... yacks

Reddishskies #2 May 26, 2015 04:54:53

Chapter 52: Shes crazyy

Reddishskies #3 May 26, 2015 03:09:56

Chapter 17: Thats it... finaalyyy... im glad i found this..

I read after up to 3 chapter or something n i found problematic... n it keep future up until chap 23.. n i had enough..im done.... i told to maself i need to stop reading this...

I accidently come accross to google as my curiosity for this anna todd person n found the news of her fanfics is published as a book n also will adapt to movie..wow that even shocking...

And i decided to giv my own cristism but yeah i failed.. i couldnt found her email information hahaha

N i decided to drop a lil comments on her twitter which much sounds like " hey im a new reader n im 21 y.o glad enough my age n maturity to says "after" doesnt deserve book.Plain stupid."

I read sooo much fanfics ..werther its kpop or not .n yeah most of all its a problematic one.. This why fanfics just stay fanfic n being there for fans.

ha ! the characters n story also shows how the authors are though.

OneDirection11 #4 Dec 29, 2014 23:29:00

AFTER IS PERFECT! I LOVE IT! HESSA FTW :D

danes007 #5 Dec 15, 2014 15:24:07

Chapter 20: I've never seen an author like that..

such a shame..

danes007 #6 Dec 15, 2014 14:02:15

I don't know much things about the International laws and laws in certain countries.. but..

I think she is really desperate to be famous (see: attention seeker)
and her greed.. it's too much..

Being famous because of a fanfiction (that was WRITTEN 'by the author herself') is not a bad thing..

but stealing countless of quotes.. lines.. etc.. from other books, stories.. movies.. is literally stealing something from the authors of the specified books...

and.. her actions is no different from a poser..

I support your opinions ;))