My Love Story

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Imagine yourself a smart, awesome, brave and pretty and owns this most handsome and cute boy, Luhan. You both went to the same private school with the other twelve guys that you have known since kindergarten. You guys call yourselves 'EXO' and it seems like your the ones who always gets away with trouble in school because of the technology you guys installed in the school without anyone knowing. For example, building an undetectable hangout on top of the school, hacking in to the school's CCTV, found a passageway, planting microphones in the girls bathroom. All your parents are close to each other including Luhan's parents that moved to Korea when Luhan was 13. Despite of having friends that masters the art of building and technology, there was nothing to compare when Luhan's family decided to....

 

 

 

 

 

 Im not a profesional writer but just an amateur. I still have to learn on how to make this story more interesting huhuhu. Before judging please be patient for upcoming updates and cmon, spare me a subscriber!!! Its been long since I had one for this story. Pretty please??  Read my other story too, Night of the Drowning Princess......satansoo is my friend FYI. Careful now...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hello fellow readers!! I'm pleased to announce you that this is my first story!!

I am planning on rewriting the starting to a more interesting one soooo

Don't give up on this story too soon...'The Big Bang' is about to happen...

This fic is most probably gonna be long but for the time being...

Please wait patiently. I am quite busy with school nowadays and I have very little time to continur writing my fics

Don't get it? Means I write my fic before posting. 

The first 6 (?) chapters are just out of the blue. It suddenly happened...totally unplanned

BUT now I have got a clear mind on what the plot it should be so be ready (?)

 

Enjoy reading!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE CHARACTERS:

 

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Name: Park Yoonjae

Age: 19 and older than Kai and Sehun

Personality: Tough girl, unexpected, Not too girly but just enough to melt guys with her cute and unique aegyo and mehrongs, Kind, Dangerous, MMA fighter, Can sometimes be a when facing a , Athletic, Strong, Confident, Smart, Vicious, Strong, friendly, lovable, caring, only child, rebellious and has a habit of blaming herself of everything.

Story: Had a hard time growing up beacuse of bullies who envy her. Apart from Luhan, she is inseprable of Lay even though now they are not always hanging out. Has another habit of kissing or pecking Lay and Luhan, but for Lay she can only kiss him for 5 seconds, or so Luhan says. Lay is a brother from another mother and have ALWAYS been. Luhan is her lover and they were planning to get more intimate in their relationship later on in the story. Lay is very envious towards Luhan but holds no dark intention to the two lovebirds. 

Position in EXO: The plan-er girl who has brains and also the ones who comes up with strategies.

Enemy: She does not hate any of her antis but just dislike them. Beware, do not mess with her!!!! But the real enemy will be revealed as the story grows. The TRUE enemy...

 

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Name: Luhan

Age: 19 and the second oldest

Personality: Fun, lovable, caring, strong, MMA fighter as well as his beloved girlfriend, manly, cute, he has the third most fangirls in school with Sehun being second and ChanBaek getting the most love, iritating, athletic, brave, smart but not enough to beat Yoonie, Chinese background, messed up life, tall, only child, loves his girlfriend to death, rebellious, hates to see his love ones sad but if its because of him and if it involves Yoonjae, he told Lay to punch the day light out of him if he did so and Lay gladly and happily approved. Sadly he recently developed an early stage sickness that just made his life harder than before.

Story: He moved to South Korea bacause of his father's extending business. He met Yoonjae on the first day he was welcome by the yet-to-form EXO. They were young and well, he immediately developed a feeling for her as soon as he saw her more like love at first sight. He is Ok when Yoonjae gets intimate with Lay but ONLY for a few seconds. He understands that they are very close but can't stand to see them kissing for more than 5 seconds. He though has a lot of secrets that had yet to be told to his friends and her. But what no one knew was that his secret was dangerous beyond your limits. He himself didn't ecpect himself to be in such tight situation where he had to choose between him or her. Find out more as the story goes on...

Position in EXO: Helps to think strategies and also a smart when it comes to technology.

Enemy: This piece of honey has no enemy...Yet

 

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Name: Lay or more intimate, his real name, Zhang Yixing. Only the ones who are so dearly close to him can call him that. He could turn into a wild boar if someone he is distant with call him that. Reasons will be told as the story gets deeper. But he also was given a nickname by Yoonjae, his so called love. One of the many includes 'China Boy'

Age: 19 and is known as 5th oldest

Personality: An adventurous person, exotic, braniac, kind, dangerous, athletic, strong, brave, teaser, caring, envious of Luhan, unexpected, usually the rebellious and 'YEAH' type, Chinese background, emotional when he sees Luhan and his loveYoonjae acting all mushy and it will always end up with him in tears, dislikes the chaotic fangirls, hates it when someone is obsesed with something, knows Taekwondo and Jujitsu, frustrated with life and has a habit of kissing and pecking Yoonjae whenever and wherever he wants too

Story: He is very depressed, sad and frustrated for the fact that you only look at him as your brother. He wants to be more than that and he also sometimes wishes he was Luhan. He has long develop loving feelings for you since you both were young. He on the other hand too can act violent and harsh at times but to only people who really annoys, irritate, messes and hurts him and all the people he cares for. Even though he saw your terible dark side and past he still chose to love you despite your flaws. He too once tried to take his life when he found out that the two were dating but kept strong and never told anyone about his deadly attempt. Although he really envies the relationship, he does not wish to take your happiness away but instead, wish you both luck until the day you guys get married which Luhan has told him about. But things started to go downhill and more ed up when time passes. All the things that he hope will never happen occurs when he has to choose between sin and happiness

Position in EXO: The hawkeye and the handyman

Enemy: How could this handfull of joy could posibly hate someone?

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Name: Xiumin or Minseok

Age: 19 but happens to be the oldest

Personality: strong, brave, handy, genius, athletic, gentle, hardworking, rebellious, geeky, friendly, does not talk alot, respectful, secretive, curious, eagle eyes, knows Shorinji Kempo or more like vital human weakpoints (later on) and pity Lay for his one-sided love

Story: Met the whole gang during their parents reunion after nearly 10 years. He has always had a sweet spot for you and for ONLY girls that are you. Maybe this boy has a crush on you but maybe he doesn't. This boy does not have much to tell despits the fact that he doesn't really has much secret to tell but all in all he is a complete genius when it come to hijacking stuffs and making advance level gadgets. He has always been the one who designs and creates  EXO's awesome gadgets and is also responsible for getting all the technologies settle. But no one actually knows where this dude learn and get the supplies from. Well it does make sense that his parents are extreme braniacs despite the fact that they live on making and designing new technology for the modern living society.

Position in EXO: The machine dude that makes everything possible

Enemy: Secret

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Name: EXO

Ages: All of the above are 19 (following the age sequence of EXO)

Perosnality: "I need to tell you guys something serious." "What?" "Chanyeol and I are pregnant, and I am the daddy." "..."

Story: The birth of EXO started a loooong time ago even before you guys were given a name. The relationship with you guys can be classified as brotherhood ans sisterhood but well....sometimes their action seems to make people believe that they are in a gay relatioship with one another

Positions: The rest dont really has much of a huge responsibility as the Big 4 since they can pretty much do anything they were told. Suho though is considered the leader since he always takes care of the 12 children after being divorced by his wife that did not even excist in the first place but the others have been taught well and are considered handymen of Xiumin.

Enemy: "FANGIRLS!"

 

THE PARENTS

Story: Has been friends with each other since childhood (excluding Luhan's) and now having their children living up thier legacy as complete rebels and trouble makers. They are very updated of their doings and unlike some other parents, they are cool. They incourage EXO to actually expose the principal's dark secrets and tearing down the school. But they are also filthy rich even though not really passing the 'good kids' list.

 

THERE ARE OTHER CHARACTERS BUT I DONT WANNA SPOIL ANYTHING SO BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR THEM!! ;)

-pls know that I made drastic changs to this story so sorry if I left out something.

Foreword

"What are you doing?"

"I'm doing this for your own good..."

"Please no! Don't do it. Don't!"

"I can't bear to see you hurting anymore. You are more happy with him than me. I should let you go and be happy. Don't worry, I'll be the one who will bear with this sin. Go with him."

"How can you say that?! I love you like I love him. Don't you trust me! Please, don't let me go. I need to be happy, and I can be happy with you."

"I know you don't love me like you love him. Besides, you will both still be together, right? I''m sorry, I have to do this."

"NO! NO NO NO!!! DON'T!"

"I'm sorry. I Love You..."

*BANG

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey there! First story~~

Please enjoy reading this fic and don't mind subscribing and commenting!!

Read 'Night of the Drowning Princess' if you have time.

I mainly focus on this fic rather than the other one.. 

Do spare your time and enjoy~~~

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Chapter 6: Update!update!update!
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abi_star #3
Chapter 1: Please give this story a chance.. I'm sorry if its boring at first..but pls understand its my first time OK? Btw did u guys watch MAMA last night? They won 4 awards! Wah congrats EXO!