Chapter 4: i've read this for nth times already and it's still painfully beautiful and bittersweetly heart-wrenching. the author probably won't ever update it again but i'm glad it's still here. wish i can find something like this. it's rare to find a fanfic so beautifully written like this.
I pray everyday that you'd update your stories esp. this one. It's bittersweet. I cant stop reading it over and over again. It keeps linger in my mind that I have a hard time going to sleep. thats how much this story affects me. I cant help but wonder how this story would end though, if you're ever gonna update it. I do believe everyone deserves a second chance.
Chapter 4: Omgggg, this story is really amazing! I'm shipping Daebang ...and, ahhhhh! Please update soon authornim. I can't wait to know what will happen when Yongguk regains his memory back. :)
Chapter 4: Okay, I have to revise the musings in my last comment. Until this chapter, it wasn't clear to me that Daehyun had hit Yongguk and was genuinely abusive (I assume that's the only way to interpret "I beat him"). I mean it was obvious he was a terrible boyfriend and a user, but now I see it's even worse than that. I don't want them to be a couple again and I'm glad Daehyun doesn't seem to be trying for that.
I am happy he's changing though. I think I do want Yongguk to remember bc I think he deserves the truth and closure.
I really like your style here, it's poetic without being over the top and still moves the plot along. Fits very well with the theme, too. Looking forward to more!
Chapter 3: The flashback broke me :'( I can see that Daehyun is breaking. He is shattering in regret because of what he has done to Yongguk.
It pains me to see how pure Yongguk is here. His perspective is always the bright one and despite not knowing what really happened, he keeps a positive vibe and is willing to forgive the culprit. He has even forgiven him already. He is that pure yet Daehyun tainted him. I remember reading Daehyun not wanting to taint the innocent image he is seeing. That moment made me think, he has already. He tainted Yongguk and he didn't even bother to see how good Yongguk is. Well, that was his aim anyway right? He wanted to break people.
If the point of view here is not Daehyun's then I would have made up my mind on not forgiving him but it is and it made me think twice. His remorse is seeping through the words that I can almost feel it. It made me feel sorry for him. But whenever I think of what he has done, especially after reading the flashback, I can't help but feel angry. Yes, he has personal issues but that is not an excuse to wreck other people's lives. That is very unreasonable.
It is right to forgive. It is never wrong to forgive and in Yongguk's case here, whatever happened or whoever the culprit was, he will forgive anyway. Because he is that pure. I will say that is fine but I will also say that forgive, but never forget and sadly, in this case, Yongguk did :/
Anyway, thank you for this! This is very well written :)
Chapter 3: It's hard to figure out if this relationship can become a healthy one. I mean, Daehyun abused Yongguk's good nature and trust and he's definitely using him, but so far it seems like Yongguk was pretty aware of that and willing in this relationship. I suppose there's some debate to be had about the being so rough, but I can't really tell if Yongguk has made it clear he doesn't want it like that and Daehyun does it anyway, or if he just lets Dae do whatever he wants b/c of his feelings for him. For me, I feel that makes a difference in whether to forgive Daehyun or not.
Daehyun does seem very remorseful. He probably doesn't deserve another chance with Yongguk either way, but I hope they can have some type of friendship. I think Yongguk is good for him and he's already so...damaged? Of course, I don't want that if it's only going to hurt Yongguk, regardless of whether Daehyun earns forgiveness. Anyway, great job!
Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Oh lord...my heart wrenched. Im listening to Blue-Bigbang and it matched really well with my mellow mood. Materialistic Daehyun was really sympathetic I cant blame him for his dark childhood experience. Yeap and the Phantom of the Opera reference, I've learned it in high school and really brought up memories. Angsty feelings to its finest. Great job!!!
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