I'm Sorry It Was You

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 Others referred to it as 'love'. But after all she had done to him, how could she call this love? She wanted to forget everything; everything but Oh Sehun. In truth, she never wanted to forget him. But how could she stay with him now?

 

She glanced at him again through her teary vision. His handsome face was contorted unlike she had ever seen it before. His usually clear bright eyes were now red and puffed out. His Adam's apple moved up and down a little as his breathing became almost laboured. She wanted to help him; she wanted to stop his pain. But how could she?

 

He wiped away at his face, sniffing deeply as he did so. Her heart bled as she watched him like this. Slowly stepping towards him, she stopped the moment his head snapped her way. She had never received such a look from him, not ever. It broke her. She had caused him to feel this way; she was the reason for this. "I.." she tried, forced to stop when the lump building in became too much. Swallowing it away, she began again, "I'm sorry."

 

He threw his head around towards her, eyes wild. "What? Is that it?" he maliciously spat, shaking his head in disgust.

She didn't know what to say. What could she say? What would make this better? Nothing.

"I..." she hesitantly began, wanting to run to him and just wrap herself into his arms and for everything to be undone, "I'm sorry it was you."

He scoffed, and he was right to do so. Turning his back to her, he began to leave the alleyway. She watched him leave; wanting to stop him, but knowing she no longer had that right.

 

Glancing over his shoulder, Sehun called to her in an emotionless voice, "Go back to your old school. Make millions for your dad. Just don't ever show up in front of me again."

 

As tears rolled down her face, she bit down hard on her bottom lip to stop the violent sobs that threatened to leave her at any moment. And then, realising that it was the only thing she could possibly do for him, she slowly nodded. She nodded and watched Oh Sehun leave her behind like he promised he never would.

 


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Lee Mira, the daughter of one of Korea's top businessmen, is made to move to another school in order to get close to Oh Sehun's father in order to aid her own father's businesses. However, she doesn't anticipate what will happen not only to herself, but to all those around her as the relationship between the two is built, and then destroyed.  Can she really do as her father wishes?  Will she be able to get close enough to Sehun? And will she be able to lie to him?

Foreword

*A Featured Story as of the 16/04/15. Thank you all so much. And it was on Sehun's birthday chapter no less*

AN: I know this might seem really cliche to begin with, but honestly give it a try - you might even enjoy it!

This is my first story, so I hope it isn't too awful! I would love if you guys would leave me comments or two now and then.

 

And, of course, I don't own EXO.

This is entirely my own work; nothing has been plagarized. I would appreciate it if you, the readers, also didn't plagarize this as a lot of my time and effort has gone into writing this story. 

 

Thanks and enjoy!

 

 

 

EmilyJ58
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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!