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muse a has a brutal home life, and muse b has to live up to her social status (maintain the status quo, good grades, being conservative but still attending the major parties and such). Normally muse a wouldn’t even register on muse b’s radar. He’s an outcast, a misfit– someone with no expectations to succeed in life, no goals. Their paths cross (alphabetical seating in two of their classes) and muse a develops an attraction for muse b, a mad obsession, a desire to get under her skin, agitate her and put his demented thoughts and demons to work. But they end up bonding through words in creative writing– specifically, poetry assignments* that they must orally present to their classmates on a weekly basis. Behind closed doors (mostly study hall, where they share a worktable), they get along really well, living out some forbidden, twisted attachment. muse b gets a rush from being aroundmuse a, he’s dangerous and foreign, something she shouldn’t want or crave. But out in the open, it’s not that easy. Everybody thinks he’s a burnout with no manners, so being seen with him would be detrimental to the hierarchy- and her future, something that’s all been planned out. You see, muse b favors order. She likes things to be familiar, a routine. muse a gives her a break from this rigid schedule. But when a glimpse of muse a’s abusive home life and childhood is brought to the foreground, how will muse b react to his closeted demons? Can they handle the scrutiny, or will the structure of society tear them apart?

*This is a poetry sample from muse a, that is directed at muse b (x)

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Scarlet_Sky
#1
Chapter 3: Thanks for sharing this! Needed some inspiration and this is exactly what I was looking for.
RavenUchiha
#2
Chapter 4: Very interesting. I used to write fan fiction stories before I went to college, but after I graduated, my brain pretty much deteriorated. I can't write a story to save my life. I have to start looking for inspiration from places and I decided to look on AFF. This is a pretty cool group. I like most of the ideas on here. Who knows, I might be able to come up with something.
shesamytheu
#3
Chapter 87: Wow the plot is really interesting. Has anyone written a story based on it yet? I'd like to read c:

And tysm for this thread. It's really helpful.
Black_Listed
#4
Chapter 95: For a writer tips, could you do one with verbs of "said"? Do you get me? I think that would be really useful.
LynnseeRae
#5
Chapter 41: Love this collection! So many amazing ideas! Thank you~
fruits
#6
this is really helpful for me
i hope for more updates :)
IRDINAPASTEL
#7
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh, the trailer though!
And I cracked up at the end of the video 'cause it said 'FOR MY TUMBLR FAMILY'
YeojaUiMongsang
#8
Chapter 8: Yo! Hi there. I was just browsing on through and I really like the idea of this plot right here. Like I can already imagine what I would want to do with it and who I’d want to use. Don’t think I’d plan on putting it up anytime soon tho, but definitely want to make a story with this sometime in the future! So would that be cool with you? Because I wanna get your permission to so I can start planning and working on it soon and be ready by the time I do actually wanna post it. If yes, I’ve got a question; is it okay if I change the title? Since I’ve already came up with another one I like more.