Incompletion
Description
in•com•ple•tion : the state of lacking something or of having failed to complete something.
Im Yoona lives with the high expectations of people around her. With enviable achievements, a handsome fiancé, and her parents' wealth, every girl dreams to be in her shoes. However, what if behind the perfection, Yoona still feels incomplete?
When fate unites her with Kwon Yuri, the girl who used to be her best friend, Yoona's life plays like flashbacks. What if her reunion with Yuri reminds Yoona about the biggest secret of her life? What has been Yuri's role in Yoona's past? Will Yoona find out the reason behind her incomplete feeling?
"What we have once enjoyed we can never lose. All that we love deeply becomes a part of us." - Helen Keller
Foreword
This fanfiction is dedicated to the Birthday Girl:
HAPPEEY BIRTHDAY, ICHA_YOONYUL
English is my second language so please excuse any grammatical errors. I hope you guys still can enjoy the story. -Anastasiaeka
Reviewer corner:
"I like the fact that you are descriptive about the story. Giving lots of details to make it easier for the reader to imagine what is really happening in the story. The story was very unique. I never read a story with a similar plot before."- MinHee_Exotic from [ST★R] L¡GHT
"This story caught me and I was really interested while reading it. I enjoyed the story as far as it is, and I liked the interactions and I'm also liking Yoona's character here." - awkward_xo from Red Cafe Graphics & Review Shop
"What is incomplete? That is the question I asked myself once I had seen your title. It isn't outrightly appealing, but it is alluring in its own way. The title is also easy to remember, and that adds in the memorable factor."- Azeline from Hαℓℓυ¢ιиαтє∂ Dяєαмѕ Rєνιєωѕ
"Your story leaves an impact and I swear I’ll never see Yuri and Yoona the same way again. The next time I see them performing or somewhere else, I would always remember this fic. I might go back to this story every once in a while to check what happens next. This is your strength as a writer." - Risuux from ❝Wonder Sky❞
"The plot, in my opinion, was very good. I think it's a solid idea and if written properly, it can be a very popular fic. I believe having one of the protagonist's love interests as a girl certainly gives a twist to the story, and allows you many different paths to lead the plot." -bumshi from ❝bumshi boutique❞
"Honestly, I never read any Yoonyul story before. So, it was a little hard for me but you make me read it, thank you so much for this wonderful story. Firstly, I’m just subscribing the story because you put the story “Subscribers Only” but now, I want to continue discover their story more." - AshleyFang from EMELLY'S GRAPHIC AND REVIEW SHOP
"The first chapter of your story reveals all the characters traits and their past years doings. The development of your characters are well done and not to forget, the interactions too. We,readers get to know more about them and will feel more insterested and continue reading the story. The flow of the story is amazing as it did not make me feel like im stopping at a certain point. Nowadays, authors seldom write stories that has a fluent flow but you did great in this point. You did a great job here!" - inspiriterz from Scarlett Reviews
"On AFF, one-word titles are rare, so it was bold of you to give your story this title. After reading this story, I can’t help but feel that the title “Incompletion” perfectly reflects the characters of the story. Without each other, the two female leads don’t feel whole, but they are too afraid of taking a leap of faith to change this incompletion." - ohheyitzkat from The Forgotten Ones
"I’m not a fan of SNSD and it’s actually my first time to read a yuri ff but I really enjoyed it. It’s like a beautiful drama, somehow realistic and tugs some heartstrings." -Cheska from ᴇRRᴏʀ RᴇVIᴇᴡ sʜᴏᴘ
"You explain the characters extremely well. I particularly like Yoona's character because her character is really realistic." Miro-chan from AKMU Reviews
"My thoughts while reading the first chapter were, 'Ah, another arranged marriage fic?' and so on. But, the originality you brought distracted me from such thoughts. I like the irony of Yuri being their wedding planner. There was more than one way of lacing their fates together so that they'd meet again. I thought that was the most creative way of spinning it." -MiaMae14 from Nich-In-Beazy Review Cafe
"This is my first time reading a yuri story and I love the storyline. As I said before, I've never read a story that can make me so emotion-attached before. Well done!" -Eyelinerbaby from ❝Eyeliner❞ Review Shop
"For those who like yuri stories, I would recommend your story." Emmery from Strawmeery's Graphics,Advertisement and Review Shop
"The story isn't very dramatic and that's good, because the reader is able to concentrate on little details." dhaatk from BLK's Review Shop
"I quite like your characters and the way you write them. You describe them well and they feel like real people" LoveX2254 from Troublemaker Review Shop
"I understand clearly how each of your characters are like, and it is good because you didn't just describe how their personalities are like directly, but you describe them through how they talk, how they act with other characters" - nahyun211 from Real Fantasy Request Shop
"Somehow, you managed to show most of the scenes instead of just telling us. That's a very good thing! I had managed to grasp what you wanted to convey through dramatic scenes. A few scenes made me smile, made me symphatize, and so on." yeolwho05 from Colloquial Mini Reviews
"This is the first girlxgirl/snsd fanfic I’ve ever read and I’m impressed! I was quite intrigued by your story and I actually can’t wait ‘till the next update haha." KandApandA from LOVE YOU TILL THE END
"What I like most about your story is how readers can relate to the characters, depsite living in a whole other world. Being able to relate to a story is key point to connect with your readers and I really commend you on being able to do that." Ameliorate Review Shop
"Overall, I like how the romance between Yoona & Yuri is lukewarm, but slowly boiling. The story's events are also well-paced." CapriquariusMei from The Casting Director Review Shop
"Very appealing description and storyline. These are very important to give your readers a good first impression and you've done it well. " Macaronicas Ad & Review
"I really did enjoy your story. It was my third girl on girl fanfiction and I liked it. It was cleanly written, beautifully laid out, and the plot avoided being too cheesy or cliche." - xxBubbleandTroublexx from ✰STARZ SHOP✰
Thanks to Lovebisous for beta-reading the first fewchapters.
Thanks to :: Runaway Rainbows :: TRAILER SHOP for the trailer.
Thanks to PARALLEL DESIGNS for the poster review.
Thanks to Love Stage! Graphics for the background and poster.
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