To Walk A Fine Line

Description

Luhan thought he knew who he loved.

 

luhan • yoon bomi

 

 

the wonderful trailer is credit to Lildevilxoxo

at Invisible Crowns || Graphic & Trailer Shop

 

poster credit to _noonim

 

Foreword

 

Luhan’s life should be perfect.

He’s one of the popular guys, with him being the striker and the hero at their recent games, he was dubbed as Lu-God because of his beautiful features, and he’s a likeable person. Basically, anyone who Luhan fell in love with should drop down to their knees and praised whatever density they believed in, because Luhan was the it guy.

But instead of being happy, Luhan was stuck, counting the days post ‘the day’, the day where he had his heart crushed because the one he loved was in love with another man.

 

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loveYM
#1
Chapter 4: My hanmi feels come back~
Bomibimbap
#2
Chapter 4: I really love this story... ..its the best story I had read so far.... i'm sooo into it???hope to see an update soon... Authornim more power...
Jennie34 #3
There is Mark in the video but his character haven't arrived yet. Hoping that you will update when you have time, author-nim ^^
yoon_bm #4
Chapter 4: I know that you are still on hiatus but I hope that you did not abandon this fic bcause the story line is nice^^
rina0807 #5
Chapter 4: Can you update this story authornim?
The story was so good, so, it's a pity if you don't continue this...
Keep hwaiting authornim... I'll always root for you..
Xxbeyondinfinity
#6
this story makes me fall in love with hanmi all over again, i wish you would be able to continue with this story or even write a one-shot featuring hanmi because i really miss this ship — but i completely understand if you are not able to
Sebootyrwr
#7
Chapter 4: I miss some hanmi and this is the only how I release my craving by binge reading this story over again. Seriously, its super amazing and it makes me giddy like a teenage girl and im almost 24!
ChanMiiii
#8
Chapter 4: I love reading this. I know you're in hiatus but please update soon~
Xxbeyondinfinity
#9
I really enjoy reading this and both of them act as childish as their appearance. Luhan can be so clueless at times and Bomi is always funny as usual. How you make up their personalities can be very believable, I cannot wait for the next chapter too see what will happen between the two and if Luhan will continue being his high and mighty, selfish self. Keep on doing what you`re doing!
_noonim
#10
Chapter 4: I swore I read chap 3 once it got updated but I really didn't know how I lost the track which and what fic I have read and commented OTL

I don't know how you planned all of this R, because really, I was mesmerized by all the details. This story have really really subtle plot (or maybe you plan something big later; how you put mark in the trailer!!!) the moments that bomi and luhan had together were really natural <3 You know I hate (and love) luhan's self confidence, I wondered how would bomi look luhan differently? but in chap 4 you somehow explained all of my question. They didn't really aware of their relationship but everyone saw them as a couple. Luhan was really comfortable with bomi, he even said couple of times "it's bomi," as if she was his little brother of something--also when bomi spent the night in his room. but when tao requested the same to bbom, luhan was the one who rejected him.

Luhan is a selfish brat (and the boys knew about it too, obviously) but bomi changed him little by little, without him realised. :) but yeah, at the last scene where he asked bomi about her profile picture-- I really want to kick him -.- he always put himself first, doesn't he? he really thought that world really revolves around him.
maybe because you write this story from Luhan POV, so we don't really figure out how bomi really felt. and I had the feeling that bomi is little bit-- quiet? and careful?

aaaah, and krissssss <3 thank you for the side story *i really want to hug you rite now* because he's really cute hahahaa "this is story of my friend" lol can't you be more obvious than this?

thank you for updating this <3 <3 I really want to know how you can write everything <3 great update <3