The Hundred-day Bet

Description

Donghae leaned forward, his face few inches away from yours. You could feel his warm breath on your face, making your knees go weak. He traced your jaw line with his finger, stopping at your lower lip.

 

“I love you,” he murmured, looking at your lips.

 

“I love you too,” you replied, almost in a whisper. He smiled, replacing his finger with his own mouth. Your heart beating really fast, you closed your eyes and enjoyed the overwhelming sensation.

 

Little did you know, Donghae had his eyes wide open.

 

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Still hurt from his previous rejection, Donghae, together with his friends, came up with a bet which will last for one hundred days. Unfortunately, it involves playing and breaking someone’s heart. Will Donghae be able to win the bet or would he just break his own heart in the process?

Foreword

Annyeong haseyo! This is my first story. I'm an amateur writer, and I'm not really good at English so if there are grammatical errors and misspelled words (I assure you there will be lots), please bear with me. I thought of this plot while I was on my way home from school. I don't know why I picked Donghae, but then I have this feeling that he really fits the role. The plot isn't finished yet, and I just write (or type) whatever comes to my mind. And thanks in advance for bothering to see this story. :)

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laurhae021981 #1
Chapter 12: Dear author nim,
Can you please update this story. It's so beautiful but heartbreaking.. I want to know if Donghae fall in love with minji.. please, update this...
Zealous-Ennui #2
Chapter 8: T.T I'm getting closer to the last update but I don't want it to end!!!! I do have to admit that it's all very purple and immature, but even then I just can't stop reading. It's like a fan fic I would have loved ten years ago, when I was 11,and not a grown woman who's read complex, detailed, well thought out stories. I feel like even though the characters are so basic and their reasoning is so dumb, it's still so satisfying! I haven't read a simple, overly dramatic fic like this and actually enjoyed it in so many years xD It breaks my heart you don't update anymore. Please do!!!
Zealous-Ennui #3
Chapter 1: *gasp* why did Siwon get surprised at the end?!?! XD this is the first Donghae story I've read, and so far it seems quite basic and simple but interesting enough to keep reading. I wish you would keep updating it though...
kriseunyeol #4
Chapter 12: Please update authornim :)
sjlove15 #5
Hope u'll update sooner :) I really loves it!!
taengsix
#6
Chapter 12: Hope you'd update soon, author-nim :) I really find your story very interesting! ♡
ChoiPuji #7
Chapter 12: please continue update. It's interesting to read. please
ladyhae
#8
Chapter 11: finally!! i thought u'r not going to update anymore! but thanks for the update authornim! :) hope u update again soon ^^
MeLoves #9
Chapter 11: I'm glad to see another chapter. Please update again soon.
Also, this chapter was brilliant and absolutely not crappy!! ^o^
AdibahAzzam #10
Chapter 10: Please update soon author-nim ^^ !
I'm so curious about the next chapter :)