Chapter 1: wow lara.... this one was, idk, deep and so emotional.
idk how you do it to write so many metaphors, honestly... i never seem to get the words while writing xD
but anyway, tho this kinda hurt my heart 'cause, you know, angst sekai but it was really beautiful anyway xD
(PS: i still gotta read the other sekai... but dunno when OTL)

Chapter 1: Once again, I'm in awe at your description and imagery *-* teach me your skills seriously
I like how you connect from one description to the next and everything flows perfectly
And to think you have written this in such a short time WOW

eehehe I'll look forward to the fluff then!