Fiction: You are My Story to Tell
Description
“Every song has a story to tell,
Every story has a song to sing,
Every part of me is a memory of you,
And every memory of you is part of me.
Every word, every sentence, every line and every story I write is YOU…”
“Junhyung, let’s break up…”
It took him a minute before he could understand what she meant. He opened his mouth to respond but he closed it again, quiet distracted as the rain dropped on her pale, soft skin. He tried to wipe it off but to his surprise, she avoided his hand and stepped backward with a frown.
“Junhyung, listen to me! Let’s break up!”
“No.”
“What do you mean by NO?” she started to cry
“We won’t break up! I know you don’t want this. What’s the problem? Is there something wrong? Do you saw me cheating on you? What?” he asked desperately
“We just have to” she avoided his eyes
“We don’t have to! We’re inseparable. We’re meant to be and there’s no reason for us to be torn apart!” he replied as he started to hug her from her back.
“I’m sorry, Junhyung…” she said softly to make the situation less worse but she was failing to it, he wouldn’t let her go.
“Please don’t do this to me” he whispered
“I don’t love you anymore…” she said
Junhyung erased the last part of the story as he desperately think of what he should write. It’s not the end of the story yet. It wouldn’t end. I should not end. But how will he suppose to continue this story? Should he erase the whole story and start all over again?
“Why do you have to say that to me? Why do you have to leave me? “Junhyung mumbled as he put his pen down and rested his head on the back chair, staring at the ceiling.
“Move on, Junhyung. It’s been five years!”
Foreword
KARA‘s Hara and B2ST‘s Junhyung have been revealed to be dating!
On June 28th, Cube Entertainment announced, “They had a senior/ junior relationship until they began dating. They’ve been dating for about a month now. When Hara was going through some difficult times, Junhyung consoled her. Because of their busy schedules, they’ve only been able to go out to eat and other dating activities three times so far.”
“No… You promised me… You promised me…” she mumbled as she tried to scrutinize on the TV screen and it was no doubt, it was him. It was him who was now famous and was now dating someone.
"You have to do something." her friend sat beside her glaring at the photo of Hara and Junhyung.
"What for?" she replied trying to hide her feeling of sadness. He said she was the only one for him. He promised he would wait no matter what. But what did he do?
"You know you have the reason to go back to his life." her friend gave her an encouraging look. Perhaps, she had the reason to come back. She just doesn't know how.
NOTE
This is my 11th fiction. I know I haven't finished four of my stories but I just thought of posting this because I have done this months ago and I wanted to continue writing about this. Obviously this was inspired by BEAST's "Fiction." This was based originally on the music video, what's unique with this is that the reason why the girl broke up with him. And I connected it also with the present news about Junhyung.
English is not my first language so if you meet some grammatical errors, sorry for that.
Rated for language ( some parts with foul words ), and I guess no but kissing scenes. :)
SPECIAL THANKS [For the amazing posterand for the review~!!]
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REVIEW
To me, the title is a bit... boring. If I saw it while scrolling through a list of fanfictions, I would most likely skip over it.
Description/Foreword: [8/10]
Plot: [4/5]
Flow: [6/10]
Writing Style: [3/5]
I really liked the flashbacks at the beginning of each chapter. For some reason, I just love flashbacks. The random poems/song lyrics (whatever they were) were alright, but they seem to bother me in a lot of fanfictions. I usually skip right over them because I just don't like that people include them in the story. It annoys me a bit.
I really enjoyed the parts where Junhyung was sitting writing in his notebook. It somehow really made me think back to the “Fiction” music video.
Originality: [10/10]
Grammar/Punctuation/Vocabulary: [15/20]
Characterization/Details: [17/20]
Poster/Background: [5/5]
Overall Enjoyment: [6/10]
Total Score: [77/100]
Just work a bit harder at it. You have a great imagination! If you need some help, feel free to ask me! I love editing things.
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