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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 13

 

Do you know that weird feeling when you get excited? Your heart starts to race, a sudden burst of energy rushes through your entire body so much that your limbs start to shake, your senses heightened and focused, your breathing becomes shallow, and your reflexes just sky rocketed through the roof?

 

For the first time in a long time, you’ve finally entered an adrenaline rush.

 

It all just happened so fast—one second you were standing in the middle of the court, and then the next second dodgeballs were just flying everywhere and people were rushing and bumping into one another in a split second. You started to panic, looking for safe areas to run into, but everywhere you looked, balls were flying towards you and the other team members.

Then all of a sudden, you could feel somebody jerk you by the back of your collar, pulling you away from an incoming attack.

 

“Focus!” yelled one of your teammates, and it’s not long after her scolding that she was rushing to grab the ball that landed in front of her.

 

With that one word, you immediately snapped out of it. Your body started to move across the court, dodging away from running players and incoming balls. You tried to remember the most important things that coach told you to do—dodge, duck, dip, dive, and most importantly dodge as if it wasn’t mentioned before.

 

“Alice, grab it!” Jongin pointed at the ball near you as he rushed to grab his own.

 

As quickly as possible, you rushed to grab the ball in the middle of the court, until that damned moment you faced the other middle man from the opposing team. Knowing that his longer arm would grab it first, you made a sudden, split second decision to dive away from the scene, ultimately dodging away from the ball the opposing team tried to throw at you.

You weren’t skilled in grabbing the balls since it seems that the other students who are much more experienced than you would beat you right to it, but facts showed that you were more than decent in dodging, ducking, dipping and diving throughout the game. You could only thank your quick reflexes and running-away-skills, if such a phrase ever existed.

 

“Grab the ball!”

“Come on!”

“Move!”

“RUN!”

 

The excited roars and cheers escalated as the two teams started to lose more members, and the rowdier they got, the more nervous yet thrilled you were. Jongin did his part well, aiming at the students with precision every time the ball made it in his hands. It was only then when the amount of players in the court lessened when you could actually see your mortal enemy clearly—Oh Sehun.

There were only three players left in your team while the opposing team only had two. All of you were slowing down your movements as everybody exchanged glances and shared quiet strategies, giving you some time to pick your breath.

However, just when you thought that you were safe for a moment, you witnessed an opposing player literally standing across you at gunpoint and just hurled the ball towards you. Shrieking out of sheer panic, you tried to move away as fast as you can as you planted yourself nearly flat on the ground.

 

“Ouch!” the ball hit the side of your forehead, the said object bouncing and rolling away to the ground after the impact.

“Alice! Coach, she was hit on her head!” a teammate that was standing behind you raised her hand, alerting the coach.

“Aim below the shoulders!” the coach reminded sternly before quickly blowing the whistle whilst pointing at the disqualified player. “You’re out!”

“Alice, you okay?” your team captain asked you as he stood in his position.

Giving him the okay sign, you nodded as you rubbed the aching spot on your head. “Yeah, I’m okay.”

 

After getting your confirmation, Jongin signaled to the coach that it was safe to continue the game. You put your focus back to the matter at hand. Sehun could be seen standing indifferently in the middle of the court, seemingly unbothered that his only teammate has gone. It’s very much like him to seem calm even though he’s the last man standing.

The students watching the game started to divide themselves, some being excited over the final battle and the rest already sure of the results in their heads. You looked over at Jongin who seemed pretty pleased by the results, judging on the little smirk on his face. Your other teammate also seemed ready to wrap up the game. 

 

Little did they know that their leisure was only temporary.

If only those two had paid attention to Sehun a little bit more. Sehun might’ve looked like he didn’t care and unenthused, even his body language gave off a vibe that he just wanted to leave the court. However, you—albeit it wasn’t done on purpose—took notice of a little strain in his Sehun’s feature.

 

He’s clenching his jaws—he’s annoyed.

 

You weren’t sure if you should feel victorious over successfully irritating Sehun, but the challenge wasn’t over yet. You held yourself from being too excited and waited for the coach to blow his whistle to start the final throttle, and boy was it the right choice.

As soon as the whistle was blown, both Sehun and Jongin ran straight for the dodgeball in front of them. With a hair’s breadth difference, Sehun grabbed the ball first and threw it to Jongin. In literally seconds, Jongin was out of the game. There wasn’t any room to react, so all you did was focus on what you can. You managed to grab a ball and aimed it for Sehun. Unfortunately, as you’ve guessed, Sehun dodged it perfectly.

 

“Missed,” you could hear Sehun snicker.

 

Pursing your lips, you raced for the ball in front of you. However, before you could reach for it, your teammate beat you to it and quickly threw it towards Sehun. The both of you held your breaths for a short second in hopes that the ball would hit him—but it never did. As soon as the ball landed right into his hands, the results were imminent. 

 

“Out,” Sehun nodded his head to the side as he ordered your only teammate out of the court.

 

That was when was your heart felt like it started to drop. It was as if in a snap of a finger, the tables have turned.

 

“Oh …” you could hear Jongin’s not-so-encouraging voice at the background.

You turned your head back to show him a helpless expression. “Thanks for the encouragement, Jongin,” you muttered loud enough for him to hear.

“No—I mean, it’s okay!” Jongin, who had caught your eyes, attempted to undo the damage. “Just keep dodging, and you’ll be fine!”

“Forget it, Alice,” Sehun clicked his tongue, his voice dripping with mock. You turned your head back to him to see him positioning himself across you. “You can’t escape the inevitable,”

“I dare to be a rebel,” you countered, forcing a smile on your lips.

“Don’t listen to him, Alice!” Jongin exclaimed. “You can do this!”

 

You detected more sympathy than confidence in Jongin’s words, but you decided to just accept it. Everybody in the room knew that it would be nearly impossible for you to outrun Sehun, or at least not forever. You were lucky enough to have survived this far and as much as you hate to admit it, it seems like this is the end of the line for you.

 

“So,” Sehun smiled thinly with a hint of excitement in his eyes, “Are you ready to show it to me?”

“Show you what?” you lifted a brow.

“A look of despair.” he answered in a heartbeat, face flat and all.  

 

Little did you know that all it took were four words and a resting face to make it your life’s conquest in that short time you had to annihilate Sehun’s sorry out of existence right at that point on in the court. It was as if the heavens had just given you blessings to accomplish this, because as soon as that whistle blew, war ensued.

Defense wasn’t even an option anymore. Time was running faster than it felt, and your body was running and dashing across the court as fast humanly possible as you grabbed and threw balls at Sehun as accurately as you could. Sehun, on the other hand, seemed like he was genuinely having fun. A lot of the students could tell that Sehun was purposely not grabbing the balls when he could’ve, but he didn’t seem like he was taking it easy on you when he literally launched those balls towards you as if they were hand grenades.

 

“You can’t escape me forever, Alice!” Sehun mentioned with a daring tone as he dashed to grab a ball in front of him.

You bit your bottom lip as you hurried to take the ball rolling in front of you and threw it straight to his direction. “Says the one who’s running away from me!”

Sehun ducked right under the ball and he popped right back up to show you a cheeky grin. “It’s funny how you don’t realize that it’s you who’s actually trying to stick with me.”

Refusing to believe the words that went into your ears, you scowled at him as you cringed. “Please, Sehun. Not even pimples want to stick with you, so why would I?!

 

The students and even the teacher weren't believing their eyes. Oh Sehun, the guy who refused to move a finger last year during dodgeball and purposely stood still so he could leave the court was finally seen running around the court with vigor, even going as far as laughing and cracking jokes. Then there was you, Alice Park, the wallflower who had somewhat built the reputation of being Oh Sehun’s contender, was publicly battling the ice prince by rapidly throwing rubber balls at him.

 

It's a pretty fascinating spectacle if you ask them.

 

“They’re really going at it,” a student commented with amusement, chuckling a bit.

“It’s kind of weird to see Oh Sehun running around,” another student blurted out.

“Yeah, but when was the last time you’ve ever seen Alice like this?” the student pointed out. “Do Hwi would die to see this!”

 

Regrettably, all good things must come to an end. You cursed under your breath when you felt your body giving in, having exerted too much energy. In a desperate attempt to save your remaining energy, you decided to ditch the running tactic and risked the catching method. As long as you could catch the ball, you might actually win this, which unfortunately is easier said than done.

 

“Just let the ball hit you above the shoulder and be done with it!” Jongin suggested, followed by yells of approvals from your teammates.

You turned your head back to glance at them, showing a look of confusion. “How? He keeps aiming below my stomach!” you told them, attempting to turn your focus back on the court until you noticed a dark, tall figure standing behind your group.

“Alice, look out!”

 

The warnings from the crowd got you to snap your head back to the crowd, and immediately what welcomed you at first sight was a ball flying towards you. Your quick reflexes immediately got you to move away, but unfortunately, you weren

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.