Finally, Something Positive

Description

After so much suffering, and feeling depressed, Taemin finally has something positive happen in his life. That positive thing? Starts with his untimely meeting with a certain Choi Minho.

 

A/N: So, I know I have a lot of stories I'm in the middle of- and I apologize that my updates aren't timely. But I came across caline's contest and I figured I'd give it a shot. Since she moved the deadline to 28. October, I decided to give it a try. I already have the idea, and know what I'm going to write. So hopefully I can write this whole thing in a short amount of time and post it and- now I'm just rambling... I'll get back to my other stories soon though, I promise! ^-^

Foreword

"What are you waiting for? RUN!" I heard as someone grabbed my hand and pulled me along the sidewalk. I was in a daze- just what happened back there? I mean, I was just minding my own business and all of a sudden a group of guys came up and backed me against the wall. They started yelling at me about something... then this person showed up. I looked again at the boy grasping my hand and running at top speed. He seemed to be muttering to himself, but I couldn't understand what he was saying.
After following him down street after street for what felt like hours, he stopped and turned to me. Who on Earth was this guy?
"There. You should be safe now. Watch out for those guys. When they're drunk they don't care who you are. If they want to beat someone up they'll do it to the next passing person. And if they're looking for... um... release.. they don't care if you're male or female, they take what they can get." The guy looked at the device on his wrist. "Crap! I'm going to be late!" He turned and started to run.
"Wait!" I instictively reached out and grabbed his wrist. "Who are you? Late? Where are you going?" The boy turned around and let out a slight chuckle.
"Ah! You speak! I was beginning to think you were mute! I'm late for work." He smiled, "I work at the dance studio down the street." He looked cute when he smiled, but his smile quickly disappaited. "If I don't leave now I really will be late!" He turned and ran without saying his name.
"Wait!" I yelled again, but he continued running down the street while I stood there watching, paralyzed for reasons I still didn't know.

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caline
#1
Kyah, finally got the time to read this, I'm so glad! 8D It was so so so sweet <333 I love you, Ling <3
twomint
#2
Gonn' go read the sequel now ;)
KuroAkuma
#3
So sweet!
BaiLingLing
#4
Thanks Jishu! <3 I can't believe I missed that one! >.< lol! ^-^
Jishubunny
#5
So this was actually 10 chapters? O_O I didn't notice because the chapters at the side couldn't be shown at my workplace because I had to use the google html thingy >.> but anyway here goes my comment... I was honestly a bit annoyed at Key because he kept on meddling and point out how they like each other. Well, I know they needed a push but to me, he acts like a know-it-all annoying person but he only did that for like 3 chapters I think and hey, I really like your story XD or else I wouldn't have bothered to read everything or write this long comment ^_^ I was just annoyed at Key for a bit simply because of my different perspective. You've done nothing wrong okay? ^^ And I like Taemin's supportive mom~! Hahahaha!!! "I am Choi Minho and I am in love with your son." Way to go Minho!!! Real smooth~! XD If Taemin had a grandpa/ma, they would have probably had a heart attack. Lolz!!! Speaking of editing, you might want to edit that red "right" into write ^^;; in your author's note at the last chapter~
xONEWorldx
#6
This story was amazing, and I really loved it. I think you should make a sequel. ^^ Certainly wouldn't be a bad thing. BaiLingLing Fighting!! >w<
TFVice
#7
So adorable. X3 And YESH!!! 2min will set out to piece together Jongkey!!! Or OnKey. (Hopefully.) Aigoooo... the ending was so precious. I am intently curious on how editing will change a bit of the story...
KaylaTrancy
#8
So cute~! AHH~ XD<br />
This is adorable. Good luck with the contest! ^_^