chapter 7

Power with in

Hoon get home from school and see his dad he trun's around  goes back down the street   but stop  when  he see his older  brother  walking  up the street  

Hoon pov 

Hoon brother  :  hey hoon come on let's  go  home 

Hoon :  no dad's  home 

Hoon brother  :  why do you hate dad so much he is good dad 

Hoon :  no he is not  a good dad 

Hoon brother  : hon i want you to stop this now come  let's  go home now 

Hoon :  no I'm meeting  up  with  a  friend oh there he is no 

Hoon see kiseop  down the street  

Hoon running down  street   to kiseop  

Hoon :  ok by hyun   

Hoon brother  :  fine then see you later 

Hoon :  hey kiseop  

Kiseop  :  oh hey  hoon 

Hoon :  hey kiseop  what is that light comeing from you're  bag  

Kiseop  :  oh my god hoon you won't  believe  me if i tell you but you are a element warrior  now let's  see what element  you are  oh my god hone you are wind i can't believe i found a othere  one ya I'm  soo  happy  Here  is you cell phone now you have to believe  me hoon ok 

Hoon :  ok ok ok kiseop  i don't  know  what  you  are taking  about but 

Wind cell phone  :  hoon you are a element  warrior now kiseop  will tell you more  about what you are   

Hoon :  ok this is a lot to take in kiseop  

Kiseop  :  but hoon  you got to fight with us 

Hoon :  ok ok kiseop  I  will  i will 

Kiseop  :  ya all right 

As kiseop  and hoon walk down the street  what  they didn't know  was  that  someone  was watching them 

End of hoon pov 

As aj was walking home he saw a monters the he see five guy's  Standing in front  of  the monter he on of them goes up to kiseop  and  tell him to hide  

Aj pov 

Aj :  who are you  

Mysterious  guy :   we are called  star fighter's   so don't  be afraid 

Aj :   ok i will go hide  

Star fighter's go and fight  the monter  but there was a flash  of light  then the monster  was gone 

All of the star fighters : what the hell was that  

Aj :  ya  i can't  see what the hell man   

Star fighter :  hey you dont tell anyone  about this ok bye 

Aj :  ok bye 

Star fighter's  walk away 

Aj walk down the street  and go home and goes to bed 

Aj :  oh god it been a long day i wounder who thoes guy's are 

Ok i will end it here but  let me know what you think please  comment  to let me know what i can work  on this story  😃

 

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hi sorry I'm not working on this story anymore I will come back with a better story :)

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bluebutterfly11 #1
Thank you guy's for waiting
bluebutterfly11 #2
Does anyone want a bonus chapter about the bad guy's who they are
and i would like to know what you guy's think
bluebutterfly11 #3
Ok I'm working on it please wait for me :)
SashaHRH #4
Chapter 4: I really like the concept, however, without punctuation it is difficult to follow. But keep at it, I have faith in you, author-nim!