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luminous- #1
Chapter 1: y yixing okcan.
this being an introductory chapter, i enjoyed it thoroughly!
it's nice that you managed to fit all these characters in well while still giving a feel of their personality.
(casually calling yuko yumiko) yumiko is so qt ahhhh. i'm waiting to see her outgoing side wheee.
also waiting to see how you'll expand on the characters... raemi sounds like an interesting girl!
eager to read the next chapter -- thanks for this one : )

+ only just noticed the 'i love you' in the math equation. i was like "maths? what is my worst nightmare doing here" excuse my slowness
spontaneity
#2
Chapter 1: i really liek this first chapter :D
yuko sounds so adorable
being all shy and stuff
just a bit confused on how she can be outgoing but at making friends o.o
maybe i'll see why later on?

its a really nice introductory chapter!!
and everyones interactions are so cute
meilin and kyungsoo arguing endlessly
hyunki trying to shut them up
how they're all so nice to newcomers and what not

just a quick question tho,
i made chaebi a really short girl, 5ft in height but you called her a tall girl?
was that a typo? or did you plan on making chaebi tall?

anyways, thanks for the update!!
i'm really excited to read the new chapter ^.^
yellowshape #3
looking forward on this :)