Half-Second Mark

Description

Chen wants to feel everything.

Foreword

For the HEY ⇒ CHEN CHEN | Oneshot/drabble Writing Contest!

Hello, guys! This is my first story on AFF, but not my first fanfic. I've been writing for almost 4 years now, and have a bunch of stories on Fanfiction.net. I come over here to read sometimes, though, and I saw this contest and decided I wanted to enter. So, here I am~ Please enjoy the story! In it, the basic idea is that Chen has gotten superpowers and now is experiencing heightened senses. It was fun to write! Most of the entries I saw were romance/angsty, but I don't even read , let alone write it, so I decided to do something more up my alley.

Please tell me what you think! I am an aspiring novelist who is currently experiencing MAJOR writer's block, which is part of why I decided to do this.

- RD :)

EDIT: I WON 5TH PLACE!!!! YAY~~~~~

Look how pretty my banner is! I'm very happy :D

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damnationSUruck #1 Sep 28, 2015 17:04:46

Chapter 1: AW MAN, reading this gave me chills. I swear.
Your similes are so unique here that my mind went worked a mile a minute creating image after image. I actually felt like I was experiencing that free fall which was - I must admit - a very new sensation as a reader! Superb job.

whattodoaboutonew #2 Aug 22, 2014 08:47:21

Chapter 1: that was an experience - reading your short was a thrilling rollercoaster ride and omg love love love!!

it was like i was an amorphous... smoke and your style made everything seem abstract; yet i FELT very much like Chen, within the moment. and because of the plot, my heart is racing for more action and more more more! this is just fantastic!!
did i say before that i love this piece of writing? :D

ilikestars #3 Aug 11, 2014 05:35:39

Chapter 1: WHY DO YOU NOT HAVE COMMENTS WHAT IS THIS BLASPHEMY
you have a beautiful mind and a beautiful soul and i want to read more of your works because you have a wonderful way with words ;;