Sooli Oneshots

Description

Series of oneshots for the sooli tag. Since I can't contain my feels.

 

Foreword

First Oneshot Fear.

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Elihela #1
Chapter 1: Sooo cute & lovely ^^ please update soon
Amalya
#2
Chapter 1: I think I read this before but forgot to comment or something. haha It was an interesting read and brought to light some things I wasn't aware of, though I'm also not sure if you weren't embellishing a bit for the story. Is Eli claustrophobic? That's more personal curiosity than anything else at this point. haha

Beyond that, it was interesting seeing the way they all slowly started to fall apart as Kevin dragged the atmosphere down (poor baby), taking Eli with him. But that was also exceptional the way they brought everyone back. That shared sense of group and camaraderie would have a very grounding effect if you asked me. :) I wanted to punch the cameraman (actually the people demanding he continue filming) but I pretty much cheered when Hoon stepped in. hehe

I thought it almost a little too convenient that there was a nearby house fire the same time they were stuck but I suppose it's possible. lol But the cute moments were well worth the stress and the little bit of levity at the end was a nice way to cap everything off. ^_^

Interestingly enough, I didn't see much issue with your homophones and the writing came across as pretty solid overall. *nods* There were a couple spots where punctuation with dialogue could be tweaked but otherwise, well done! I look forward to more! :D
Merrick
#3
Chapter 1: AWWWWWWWWWWWWW totally the most adorable Sooli oneshot ever!!! you are an amazingg writer!!! please do continue!! <3 it was an wonderful first one!!! I wanna see more of you :)
NikeIsCraZy #4
Chapter 1: Waah~~~ this was amazing!!!! :D I love it!!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥
You're a great writer and it was just kind of breath taking :333
inbetweenElseop #5
Chapter 1: Oh precious Sooli.
This was beautiful! Everyday at work I have to ride the elevator and pray that I don't get stuck with those folks, but if it were U-Kiss and I had to console any of them "come to momma baby" especially Eli.
keopi_girl
#6
I love you. o.o this is one of my favorite ships ever!
ellisana
#7
Chapter 1: Awww! Personally I'm more of an ElSeop shipper but you got me to keep reading a Sooli - good job!
LoveKoreaAndAnime
#8
Chapter 1: >.< I love Sooli so much!! It's difficult to find new storys.... And there was yours ^^
It's great ^^ <33
I'm looking forward to read more~