Silent love

4 Cakes of love

Onew’s P.O.V

Hey everyone, I’m Onew. I’m a really quiet and shy student in my school with only a friend which is Taemin, the kingka. Taemin is more talkative and populer then me, but he always suportive to me no matter what. He’s just like my dongsaeng. One time, I had a crush on this blonde girl, no she’s not an american, she’s a korean like me, but she dyed her hair blonde XD. She’s Park Luna. She’s kind, smart, have a golden voice, cute, pretty, the thing is, she’s a perfect girl. But I just can’t talk to her, I’m too shy to do so.

No One’s P.O.V

“Dude~ Stop staring at her! Go and talk!” scolds Taemin

“I can’t Tae, I’m too shy.” Says Onew sadly

“Aiish! What’s with you! Every girl in this universe likes confident guys, not a cold and shy guy like you!” scolds Taemin

“Taemin-ah...”

“I don’t care what! But you have to talk to her before he.... I TOLD YOU!!!” he scolds Onew as he sees another student approaches Luna

“But...but...”

“YOU’RE USELESS HYUNG!!” screams Taemin in frustration earning a stare from the whole canteen including Luna, Amber and Sulli

“Aiish, Taemin strikes again~” says Amber rolling her eyes

“Stop being rude!” scolds Luna softly

“Neh, Luna~” nods Amber pouting

“But... it migth be cute if Taemin and Onew likes you at the same time unnie.” Says Sulli

“Mworago? That wouldn’t happen.” Scoffs Amber

“Not you, but Luna.” Says Sulli

“Hmm maybe...” says Amber

“No way, that’s impossible, he’s like avoiding me.” Pouts Luna

“Aniya, didn’t you heard Taemin? He’s just shy. Come on, talk to him.” Encourages Sulli

“Maybe I can try.” Smiles Luna “But I’ll make him talk.” Smirks Luna

“You got it~” Amber and Sulli cheer in unison

“Cham! What happen to Kris, by the way.” Says Luna suddenly

“Kris? We broke up, he says I was way~ To manly for him.” Says Amber

“Well you are.” Comments Sulli, the tomboy just roll her eyes

“You should be more feminine you know.” Pouts Luna

“I don’t want too.” Arggues Amber, her two friends just sigh

“Anyway, we have to get him to talk, agree?” asks Luna

“AGREE!” the others answer in unison doing the ‘cheers’ with their coke (eh?)


“So are you gonna say something?” asks Taemin

“I don’t know what to say.” Pouts Onew

“Aiish Hyung! Listen to me!” scolds Taemin “We’re in 12th grade now, which means... Good bye to Luna next year! You have to confess before it’s too late!”

“I know that, but how?!” asks Onew

“I have an idea.” Says Taemin having a sticky note on his hands

“Eh?!”

“Write on this thing! Now!” says Taemin

“About what?”

“You cluless wierd hyung! About what you want to say to her!” scolds Taemin, Onew whimpers and writes what he wants to say to Luna which is..

‘I have a diabtes (why?) because your so sweet J’

“Aww hyung~” teases Taemin “Give it.”

“Eh?”

“Give it,.” Demands Taemin, Onew whimpers and gives it to Taemin

“Now, let’s put it here~” says Taemin putting it to Luna’s locker

“YA! Why did you put it there?!” scolds Onew

“So she’ll know.” Answers Taemin

“But... Taemin-ah~” whines Onew

“Shut up!” scolds Taemin making the older whimper

“Now, let’s go before they found out.” Says Taemin smirking and drags Onew away from her locker


As Luna opens her locker it reveals a pink note with the pick up line Onew just wrote

“Omo~ Luna unnie~” teases Sulli

“Mwoya?~” whines Luna blushing

“This pick up line is so cute J, I think it’s Jong or Onew.” Says Sulli, Luna nods

“If it’s Jong I’ll beat him up.” Says Amber

“What?! You want to beat up your own bro?!” asks Sulli

“Not that kind of beating.” Pouts Amber

“Kurae? We’ll find out who wrote this.” Says Luna

“Neh~” answer the two girls in unison.


Since that day, Luna always gets some pick up lines from Onew which the three girls refer as Mr. Mystery. In the end, Luna puts a note on her locker saying

“Mr. Mystery, I really want to get to know you, will you accompany me buying ice cream.”

Onew sees it but to shy to go until Taemin scolds him

“YAH! Why don’t you go and eat ice cream with her, it migth be Jong!” scolds Taemin, Onew shakes his head

“I can’t.”

“DO IT!” scolds Taemin, but Onew still shakes his head and leaves his bestfriend dumfounded there.


At the ice cream store, Luna keeps on waiting for Onew to come but he didn’t

“Aiish why didn’t he come.” Pouts the girl “Maybe he is as cold as ice afterall.” She says as she sighs and gets out of the ice cream store


The next day

Luna opens her locker finding a note saying “Please look to the back.”

“Omo! Amber, what are you doing?!” asks Luna

“Just follow the directions~” says Amber, Luna smiles

“Neh~ Arasso~” nods Luna as she follows the direction

‘Omo! I’m so excited~’ thougth Luna as she follows the directions to the sender

“Onew? Is that you?” asks Luna, the said boy nods

“Come on, you want to say something do you?” asks Luna, Onew nods shyly

“You’re so cuteJ” says Luna smilling, onew blushes sligthly

“Uhm...”

“Come on, you can do it.” Says Luna

“I....I.. I like... uhm aniya, Park Sun Young saranghamida!” says Onew

“Awww me too J” says Luna patting his head, Onew blushes

“Jinjja? Or is it that you like yourself?” asks Onew

“Of course not, I’m not that mean.” Pouts Luna, Onew laugh a little

“Are we official?” asks Luna

“Uhm...”

“I reconsider that as yes.” Smirks Luna, Onew nods still blushing like a school girl (a/n: eh?)

“At last I can call you oppa~” says Luna smilling, Onew laugh at her cuteness

The end 

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krissingu
#1
Chapter 1: Hahahaha.. J. I like the way Onew (or pple) calling him as J. J is sooooooo yyyyyyy
Iaminnocent #2
Chapter 4: awww~ that's cute^^
asainalyssa25
#3
Chapter 3: MinSul, yaay!^.^
Thank you for another great update!
F(SHINee), all the way!♡
MiracleMinSul #4
Chapter 3: Aww minsul , so cute . Ship them forever . And i also ship taestal lunew and kryber . Such a nice pair authornim . Good job . F(shinee) forever .
moonlightangel77 #5
Chapter 1: Update soon! Shineeeffects feels get real! Ecspecially Lunew!
asainalyssa25
#6
These are my two ultimate bias groups, and favourite couples ever!!
BBdaekey
#7
Chapter 2: Awww I really like this chapter with Keyber it's sooo cute!!