Home staffs advertisement form review form PACKAGES Advertisement and Review shop established july 2014   lin       LITTLEEDEEER• bts_kimtaehyung •STORY REVIEw       BLIND HEIRS     TITLE:   Your title is really captivating on my eyes an very intriguing. It will pull the readers to subcribe and continue reading the whole fic.   DESCRIPTION:   The way you wrote your description gave me some sort of  hook on your story, it has the feeling of angst and I love it XD     PLOT:   At first I was worried that it will have the same story as The Heirs but you prove it that I'm wrong. I like stories that are based from MV's, TV shows , K-Dramas or movies but it seemed it will not be a new story but the idea of your story seems original for me,cause I never read anything like this and as I read on by chapther you dropped some hints which leads to some twist and turns of you story  
CHARACTERIZATION:   you explained Kim Yoo Jung very well detailed character here as the other characters I still don't read so much of them cause you stroy is still developing.   FLOW:   The story flow is nicely written and with the flashbacks it makes more beautiful     WRITTING CONVENTIONS:   your spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, and paragraphing are nice, keep it up!     ENJOYMENT:   Your story is really my cup of tea so I'll keep on reading it till end :D       NOTE:   Sorry for the delay, I got