10010

Description

To the government, they were only numbers, but to each other, they were everything.

Entertainer #100 called himself Baekhyun.

Cleaner #10 was the 61st to carry that number, but he had no name.

Foreword

Prologue



There were many sub-castes, but overall, society was divided into two: the Elites and the Numbered.

 

Numbering the Numbered ultimately determined their lives, but it was a simple process, only involving meticulous record-keeping, a good eye, and some patience. Suho, having those qualities, was given the crucial job by the General.

 

As he strolled to the orphanage (a euphemism), he thought about what he had to do everyday and how well he did.

Whenever someone died- and that happened frequently- Suho would have to cross that number off the list and go to an orphanage (there were many) to find a replacement. He would then carefully and quickly scan the room for one who would fit the job, put it into the records, and send it to training.

He was the reason why society ran smoothly, and he was definitely proud.

 

Reaching the location, he entered and the smell of stale air and unwashed bodies shocked him out of his thoughts. No matter how many times he went, he was never prepared for the disgusting scent.

He blinked and the scrawny children strewn about came into view. Some were chatting happily, too young to care. Others sat forlornly, matching the dingy warehouse well. A Guard approached Suho and he nodded, the choosing beginning.

He looked around the room, hoping to get out of there as quickly as possible, and saw him. There was something about the boy- a beautiful face and a mysterious aura- that was perfect. Suho pointed the boy out to the Guard, who quickly went to fetch him. To be honest, Suho was kind of sad that the innocence in those eyes would soon be gone, but at least the porcelain skin wouldn't be marred by the unforgiving sun.

 

Entertainer #100

 

Suho continued his search, eyes moving just as quickly even though his nose had grown accustomed to the smell. He saw lanky arms and legs in the corner of his vision and motioned to the Guard before hurrying out to inhale the fresh air.

 

Cleaner #10

 

#100 and #10...it was probably fate.




♔ A  u  t  h  o  r  '  s    N  o  t  e ♔

Sequel: After Dawn

 

 


Alternate summary: a dystopian world where chanyeol is always happy, baekhyun is a pissy butthole with occasional appearances of kai being immature, kyungsoo questioning why he's friends with some people, sehun being a brat and cameo appearances of the rest of exo.

*100 is "baek" in sino-korean and 10 is "yeol" in native korean

 

 


written for the • ℕew Ƴear ~ Ɲew ʂtory • contest

prompt: It seems like I'm happy all of the time, but I'm human too. It's not possible to always be happy. (Chapter 8)

 

 


thanks to

KaihleeLo from BLK reviews for the review!

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Alice from☆ Hαℓℓυ¢ιиαтє∂ Dяєαмѕ Rєνιєωѕ ☆ for the review!

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illjae
#1
Chapter 13: i loved this so much ㅠ﹏ㅠ
xiu_mine
#2
Chapter 14: Ow. Short! I didn't mean anything wrong with that but it feels kinda rushed towards the end. I mean it's a good one but given the chance to have build up a little more, i think it's gonna be great. I just felt bad that Baek had to go through that for him to realize the importance of his friends in his life and understand the value of freedom. I would've wanted closure on your sequel for a lot of things, it's just unfortunate that that was discontinued. Still thanks for sharing them!
xiu_mine
#3
Chapter 7: So much for the fluffiness that I referred to earlier. This took an angsty turn of events and boy those words and the reality hurts so much! I feel bad for their friendship :'(
xiu_mine
#4
Chapter 5: That surprise! Ahhh is that true?! I dodny2 dare read past the comments section below cos I didn't want the spoilers at all.. But why?! Ahhhhh

But this is sooo interesting! I love their numbered names and the idea of having their secret names too... I am so craving for dystopian but I'm getting fluff despite the general idea of their fates. Maybe it's the fluffiness of Chanyeol and the bickering/teasing of Kaibaek.. Or maybe this is the calm before the storm? But Yixing appearing however sudden it may be still gives me fluffy images with his and Baek's interaction through music.. I'll read some more
_jongdaenosaur
#5
Chapter 13: The scene where baek thought of his friends in punishment made me rly sad. I hope sekai could forgive baek someday :((( i mean yes baek was selfish yes but i mean sekai made him happy and all but being born a number wasnt exactly the life anyone should be grateful for :((( and and and chanyeol was such a squishy character??? Like so squishy i want to hug him PLS BE HAPPY YEOL ughhhhhh also I don't need to comment on yixing do i lol

Am i commenting too much should have i just put one comment per fic am i blabbing too mucH IM SORRY I ALWAYS HAVE THINGS TO SAY ABT YOUR STORIES BC IM ADDICTED AF
_jongdaenosaur
#6
Chapter 5: You. YOU.

ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH YIXING JUST BEING YIXING no srsly i keep squirming bc this was unexpected af and ugh my heart
_jongdaenosaur
#7
Chapter 2: Sekaaaaaaaaai my love (yesss my life is complete)

And ing chen at the end lol pls
_jongdaenosaur
#8
Chapter 1: Like... Bc its #10 so i kept thinking it was yixing. I was like 'oh? Yixing is here?' But then it was puppy eyes and happy virus and like 'wait???? Chanyeol???? So not exo numbers????'

The prologue too omf like i kept associating yifan with #100 just bc he's #00 lmfao so for second i was like IS THIS KRAY FIC WHAT IS HAPPENING but then like the stupidly slow that i am i realised you weren't sticking to all exo numbers lol i don't even know anymore but i'm enjoying this fic so far

ALSO KAIBAEK FRIENDSHIP YESSSSSSSSSS
hyhigrin
#9
Chapter 14: You made me think this was Baekyeol all this time... you shameless, shameless girl XD Anyways, I enjoyed reading it!