Chapter 2: im so happy that this pic includes my fave otp; hayi with those 3 boys. how much i wanted them to be together in a fic (and in reality too lol). yep right, found some wrong grammars that made me a bit confused hehe. but i'll still lookin forward for the next chap, hwaiting!
Even though this seems like a good story, you have a lot of errors here. I almost couldn't understand what was going on. But the plot is interesting so I'll keep reading. I hope it ends with Bodong lol.
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