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Suhyo07
#1
Author + Profile Link: Suhyo07, http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1251138
Co-Author: None
Story Title: Unexpected Encounters
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1164230/unexpected-encounters-blockb-ubomb-exo-taekai-wolfau-collegelifeau
Genre: Romance (slight), fantasy (wolf au), angst, adventure, slice of life (I guess, since it's collegeau)
Story type: chaptered
Story status: ongoing
Characters: Ubomb (Block B), Zikyung, P.O, Taeil, Jaehyo, Taekai, BAP, Baekhyun, Jongdae + mentions of EXO, mentions of instructors of 1Million dance studio
Rated: Yes, violence and on later chaps
Is English first language: No, but it comes second or third, I guess
Any specific parts: Mostly plot and characterisation, as well as the flow
Any questions/tips: hmmm, not really, but if you're a fan of BAP/EXO/Block B please tell me how close to their real personalities the characters in my story are
Subscribed? Yep
Anything else: thanks a lot in advance ^^
myheartswishes
#2
Chapter 1: Hello :) I thought I was on the request list the last time I checked but my request has somehow gone missing? Did I get it wrong?
princeOSH
#3
- Author + Profile Link: princeOSH http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/503153

- Co-Author + Profile Link (If any): none

- Story Title + Story Link: The True Meaning of Love http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1151142/the-true-meaning-of-love-fluff-romance-snsd-exo-sehun-kaisoo-muslim

- Genre: romance sliceoflife fluff

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: chaptered but divided into 5 stories.

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: Ongoing

-Characters: Sehun x O/C . Kaisoo. Taeyeon, Yixing, SUZY.

- Rated (Yes/No): Yes but on future chaps

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.)

- How many/Which chapters would you like me to review: only 1 because there's only one XD

- Is English Your First Language: Nope. Second.

- Any Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: Grammars.

- Any questions you'd like to ask or tips you'd like to request for: I would literally accept any advice you give.

- Have you subscribed: YESSSSS

- Anything Else: Thank you for reviewing ~~~~~~~~~~~`
minleo #4
Author + Profile Link: minleo http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/767016

- Story Title + Story Link: The Colour of Emotion http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1125570/the-colour-of-emotion-angst-gang-mafia-romance-violence-bts-got7

- Genre: angst, romance, gang, mafia, violence

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: Chaptered

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: Ongoing

-Characters: Saerom (oc), all of BTS, all of Got7

- Rated (Yes/No): No (although some later chapters may be rated for violence.

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.)

- How many/Which chapters would you like me to review: 7, please.

- Is English Your First Language: Yes

- Any Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: Writing style, story plot(so far), use of the ring (you'll see what I mean when you read it^^')

- Any questions you'd like to ask or tips you'd like to request for: Any kind of constructive criticism is welcome. ^^

- Have you subscribed: Yes

- Anything Else: No, thank you. :)
redocean-
#5
- Author + Profile Link: redocean- (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/38093)

- Co-Author + Profile Link (If any): -

- Story Title + Story Link: away from the shadows destroyed by the light (http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/783759)

- Genre: angst, psychological

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: oneshot

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: completed

-Characters: Kai, Krystal

- Rated (Yes/No): Yes

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.): trigger warning (self harm, insanity, suicide)

- How many/Which chapters would you like me to review: one

- Is English Your First Language: no

- Any Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: i'd like you to focus more on the characterisation and how i describe their feelings

- Any questions you'd like to ask or tips you'd like to request for: No

- Have you subscribed: Yes

- Anything Else: This oneshot is written in a writing style I've never tried before, it might confuse you at first but I hope you'll understand why I chose to write it in that kind of manner. Thank you so much for your time <3
WhisperOfTheSea
#6
KaihleeLo
#7
Chapter 9: Take your time~
moonlightJHN
#8
Chapter 1: I see my name on the list ! Can't wait to hear your thougts about it !
MissLovergirl360
#9
Chapter 8: I almost cried when I read this message. I'm going through the process of not writing cos of my end of year exams and I am so scared that I'm not going to do well cos I know I'm not smart. I've been struggling so long and I don't know if I can even do this. Nevertheless, thank you for your message.