Author + Profile Link: Suhyo07, http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1251138
Co-Author: None
Story Title: Unexpected Encounters
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1164230/unexpected-encounters-blockb-ubomb-exo-taekai-wolfau-collegelifeau
Genre: Romance (slight), fantasy (wolf au), angst, adventure, slice of life (I guess, since it's collegeau)
Story type: chaptered
Story status: ongoing
Characters: Ubomb (Block B), Zikyung, P.O, Taeil, Jaehyo, Taekai, BAP, Baekhyun, Jongdae + mentions of EXO, mentions of instructors of 1Million dance studio
Rated: Yes, violence and on later chaps
Is English first language: No, but it comes second or third, I guess
Any specific parts: Mostly plot and characterisation, as well as the flow
Any questions/tips: hmmm, not really, but if you're a fan of BAP/EXO/Block B please tell me how close to their real personalities the characters in my story are
Subscribed? Yep
Anything else: thanks a lot in advance ^^
- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.): trigger warning (self harm, insanity, suicide)
- How many/Which chapters would you like me to review: one
- Is English Your First Language: no
- Any Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: i'd like you to focus more on the characterisation and how i describe their feelings
- Any questions you'd like to ask or tips you'd like to request for: No
- Have you subscribed: Yes
- Anything Else: This oneshot is written in a writing style I've never tried before, it might confuse you at first but I hope you'll understand why I chose to write it in that kind of manner. Thank you so much for your time <3
Chapter 8: I almost cried when I read this message. I'm going through the process of not writing cos of my end of year exams and I am so scared that I'm not going to do well cos I know I'm not smart. I've been struggling so long and I don't know if I can even do this. Nevertheless, thank you for your message.
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