Broken promises (Semi-hiatus) NEW CHAPTER

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when you were 6 your parents sent you overseas to study while your twin sister stayed with them. Before you left your two closes friends promised to take care of her. 11 years have passed and you’re finally back in Korea only to find out that your friends’ couldn’t keep their promise, your sister has been in a coma for the past 2 months and to make things worst your parents are forcing you to marry the jerk who hurt your sister the most. What will happen when you find out what really happened to your sister. If you had to choose between your happiness and your sister, who would you choose?


characters

Ryu Hwayoung

 -16 years old born on April 22 1998

 - talents are singing, dancing, rapping and fighting 

 -is smart but doesn’t show it

 - hates showing and talking about her feelings

 -always find a way to get into trouble

 - is Yongguk and his brother childhood friend and Yongguk first crush

 -is cold hearted to the ones she doesn’t know and the ones she doesn’t like 

 -is over protective of her twin sister Hyoyoung
-likes to annoy people

 

Bang Yongguk 

 -16-year-old born on march 31st 1998

 -enjoys teasing his twin brother Yongnam

 -is top of his class  

 -talents are singing, dancing and rapping 

 -always gets out of trouble

 -leader of BAP
-nice to his friends and family but cold towards everyone else  
-first to bully Ryu Hyoyoung
-is Hwayoung and her sister childhood friend and Hwayoung first crush


Ryu Hyoyoung 

 -16 years old born on April 22 1998

 -has been bullies since age 8

 -is the nerd in school

-childhood friend of Yongguk and his brother

 -tries her best to stay out of trouble  

-talents are singing and rapping
-is nice to everyone, even the ones that hurt her
-tries to never worry her sister Hwayoung 

 

Bang Yongnam

 -16 years old born on march 31 1998

 -helps Hwayoung because he couldn’t help Hyoyoung

 -is kind of smart  

 -Hyoyoung and her sister childhood friend

 -nice to everyone unless you give him a reason to hate you

 -likes making his brother Yongguk angry
-talents are dancing, singing and rapping 

 

BAP

  -Yongguk friends 

 -nice and funny when you get to really know them

 -all bullied Hyoyoung

 -(from left to right) Jongup (16), Youngjae (16), Himchan (16), Yongguk (16), Deahyun (16), Zelo (15)

 - oldest too youngest Yongguk, Himchan, Deahyun, Youngjae, Jongup, Zelo

Foreword

I arrived home I felt like there was something wrong but l decided to ignore it. "Hyoyoung it's me your sister I'm back!!!!" Finally, I’m able to hug my sister, I’m so happy. As soon as I entered her room I knew that my parents were hiding something about my sister from me.

"Sweetheart when did you arrived?" I turned around to face my mother, she was wearing a navy blue dress with black heals if I didn't know any better I would have thought she was going to a party. Before I could ask her where my sister was I heard the front door open, "honey I’m home. I have some good new to sh-". My father stopped speaking as soon as he saw me. "What are you doing here. You weren't supposed to come till the 15th of this month". My father looked at me with anger in his eyes, why does he always looks mad at me? 

"It's nice to see you to father and yes I did have a good flight" I said with as much sarcasm as I could. "Before you start yelling at me for speaking to you like that I want to know where is Hyoyoung and why is her room empty". I wanted to sound calm but to my ears I sounded like a child complaining. My mother looked away from me but I saw tears in her eyes. I waited for one of them to speak, my father spoke with his business tone and blank expression. "Your sister is in the hospital; she has been in a coma for two months. Now tell me, WHY ARE YOU HERE!?!?!!". Wait did he just said in a coma? What? No, no that can't be true, they promised to protect her. For the first time I was speechless in front of my father. "Honey, today is the 15th".


I laid down on my bed, so much had happened since I arrived. I just wanted things to go back to how they were when we were little. As soon as I close my eyes the door burst opened, I sat up only to see my dad. "No it's okay you can come in", he looked at me with disappointment. "I just want to inform you that you are getting married and before you start complaining like a little kid I’m not asking for your opinion. You WILL get married". With that he turned around and closed the door. Ugh as if my life didn't already, I'm only 16!!!!! I can't get married, no I won't get married


Hey guys this is my first fanfic and i would like to apologize in advance for any mistakes

i dont think i would update every day so dont hate me.

Enjoy and feel free to comment on anything also if anyone has a way to make this story better i would like to hear your sugestions thanks ^.^

 

almost forgot this pictures dont belong to me so credits to the ownwers and any other story that resembles this one is a coincidence this is base on my wild imagination please dont steal my idea thats all and thanks again

creadits to ☾✰ Shining Moonlight Graphic Shop✰☽ for designing the poster <33

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jmayo81 #1
Chapter 46: I was reading along & enjoying being able to catch up. Still sad that her & Yongguk haven’t spoken, but holding out hope. But HER SISTER IS AWAKE!?!?!?!? Ooooh, looking forward to more, thank you for updating!
Zeroxzee93
#2
Chapter 46: This is honestly the best thing I've read so far in my life. thank you
jmayo81 #3
Chapter 45: what the WHAT????? Oooh, that was a bomb I was not expecting!! Wow, it was so sweet to have that closure with her poppa, but it feels like the roller coaster is just beginning. Sad that her & Yongguk have no contact with each other :( loved this chapter! Thank you for updating!
jmayo81 #4
Chapter 44: Welcome back & thank you for continuing. Awww man!! I hate to see her & Yongguk this way, but her dad too!!! I hope they make it in time, but seeing the school freak out the way they did was too funny ^_^ you could feel the tension &a bratty Yongnam. Ooh, btw, Auto correct struck &a changed Yongnam to Youngman :) thank you for the updates, looking forward to more!!
Aidemstarz
#5
Chapter 28: This is a really good story. I'm read up to here in one evening lol. Hwayoung has had a very sad life :(
jmayo81 #6
Chapter 43: I have a love/hate relationship w/ this chapter. I want to hold & slap Yongguk at the same time!! He can fight w/ her by his side, dividing is not a good idea, not to mention that she really needs him right now, ugh....STUPID YONGGGUK!!!Thinking this is for the best, when in actuality it's hurting the both of them so much! But the moment between her & kris, I loved it, made me smile. She needed a bright spot, well that & thank goodness for Yongnam. Thank you for updating! I can't wait for more ^_^
jmayo81 #7
Chapter 42: Thank you for checking in, no worries on when you can update! School comes 1st, just do when you can! Can't wait to read it when I you do. ^_^ Fighting on your exams! ..... nope, I didnt watch MAMA, but I watched Idol Battle Likes w/ B.A.P
jmayo81 #8
Chapter 41: I want to grab Yongguk by his collar &I slap him!!! OMG, even after what Leetuk said, ahhh stupid Yongguk. I get it, they're all scared, but there has to be another way! But now if anything happens, they're on their own! I mean REALLY YONGGUK!!!??? -_- At the hospital, poor Hwayoung!!! He managed to hurt again, due to being scared, as if she wasn't!!! Thank you for updating & look forward to more!
youngmin22 #9
Chapter 41: You are so bad Yongguk, Hwayoung can do anything kuat for make you and your friends safebvut this what you give to her.
Bad Yongguk......