Chapter 1: *gasp*
hey why why why? why someday again? i thought Kai miss baek?

Chapter 1: Title and Foreword Page (4.8/5)
Names are proper, they have to be capitalized. Other than that, it looks good.
 
Plot (35/50)
I liked the general premise of the story. It was a case of bad timing between Baekhyun and Kai, and I always like stories along that theme. But the story lacked substance. I was expecting so much more.
And this was supposed to be a oneshot. A complete story within one chapter, but you left it too open ended. I get the feeling that you're planning on continuing the story, which is fine, but it isn't what I asked for. There was no real answer to Baekhyun's question, therefore no real ending.

Flow and Execution (10/20)
This was a hard read, but mainly because of the grammar. There was a lack of consistency of the tense. It seemed to switch from present to past from one sentence to another. There were a lot of 'is' where there should be 'was'.
 
Spelling and Grammar (5/20)
The spelling wasn't the problem(though there are a few typos), the grammar was my big issue. 'I' always has to be capitalized. The punctuation was sloppy. It's 'two' not 2. And again, the inconsistant use of past and present words.
 
Appearance (2/5)
Far too spaced out. Use page breaks. The words in the text messages ran off the page.

Total: 56.8

I would really suggest that you have a beta check your other entry before I get to it.

Chapter 1: So. Sequel please? I didnt really get it. :)

Chapter 1: Realising ur feelings for someone until that person left u..awww Kaibaek..<3<3 They are just..*sighs* I don't hv wrds to xpress my feels..:) Although i was upset when Baek left, bt it was still gd r8 as they got together again..:D Sweet n simple story..<3

Plz write more Kaibaek author nim...:D

Chapter 1: Oh gosh. I almost cried at the start. I thought it was going to be a kaibaek angst and my heart won't be able to handle that. But hurray! The ending that I want. I like the conflict when Baekhyun left. If he didn't, Kai wouldn't have probably realized his feelings. It's short, simple, but filled with emotions. I like it!

Chapter 1: this is cute.but sad. T_T
sequal?? maybe? :D

Why do I have this feeling it'll gonna be an angst? ;;
Anyway, update soon~