June's Promise

Description

In the final residue of May,
He appeared amidst the remainder of Spring breeze,
Bringing along a promise for the Summer,
Buried underneath diminishing sparkling pulses,
Feelings that shouldn't be,
I believed in his promise,
I believed anything and everything he said,
Even if I knew believing is a grave mistake,
But what do I do when he disappeared before I could admit it,
What do I do when I let him break into my protected refuge and robbed my sanity,
What do I do when his promise came fulfilled in the first bell of June, disappointingly,
When all I want now is what i couldn't have?
When all I want is all that has left?
When all I wanted is no longer what I want?
When all I want is...
him?

Foreword

Sequel to this: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/733893/

(you need to read the story above first in order to understand this fic...)

Ok, so basically it's the continuation story of the 39-year old female protagonist, the mysterious attractive guy she met by the river she went to, whenever she contemplate suicide out of depression, and the ambiguous promise he left her with, before disappearing at the end of the previous story. 

 


^ click play to see how this song is a little more relevant to the fic than previous one...xD.

if i find a more relevant song to the plot, i'll change the song again...><...

 

Thank you for all the poll voters that helped me decide title, lol.

 

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sorry i said i'd update within 24hrs but apparently i'm unable to.down with some fever n some house 'tragedy' but i'll try my best to post it ASAP.sorry again.

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pikarina
#1
Chapter 6: June guyyy !!! >< He's tugging my heart. Please let her pick him ! Givehimtomeifyoudontwantloljk and and why are both May and June so brazen ? Like you cant even be mad at her for not sticking up for herself because truthfully, even i cant think of anything fast enough to outsass them lol. And Cherryish, lol ever the poking fun. The third grade artist lol.
Heyyy what is this you gonna kill her or make her amnesiac ? Dont you dare. Lol.
June guy fighting !!! ♥♥
Mahwiii
#2
Chapter 6: ...
So cherry is a mystery T^T jskjfjfdn :<
ohh could it be more than one person :o
and heeey if the voices already autotoned then... he she isn't a singer really.. u want to show how idols this days through cherry right? :o
but somehow june guy is suspicious its too easy to convince him like that? maybe he really is cherry but also i don't think its him either..
the ending of this chap tho..
she can't die yet.. no not yet ;-;
will she be in a coma for the rest of june? ehh /i hope may guy comes visit her winkwink/
xD
okay sorry >.>
bye /runsaway/
Mahwiii
#3
Chapter 5: Since he slept on her then that means that... She wasnt thaaaat bad right..?
But why is the sun rise somthing... I want to know
Does it meananything?
Is the days count important? :o
But then again u will have to make like 30 chaps..
Tbh idk who to root for
As much as the may guy is creepy i like him... /u know i like creepy evil ppl/
But then the june guy is too nice and cute and ;--;
Its haaard D:
Well the may guy call her noona? If he does i will choose him xD
But twinnie u seem to like cheesyness xD tho this story is better to be cheesy i guess xD
Now who is cheeryish ;-; i have a feeling its the may guy..
YAH but why does he not tell her his name... Uhh.. Its suspiouses is he a stalker e.e
/what am i even saying ok bye now/
sgillan #4
Chapter 4: Wow, this May dude (or Cheesy..Cherry..Isshy)who ever he is yet to be,sure is a mind isn' he? I like the way he's point blank, blunt and straight out in your face.He makes you think twice about things that you would otherwise not think much about.He knows exactly how to get "Aunty" to squirm to the realization of the truths about her that she tries hard to conceal.What a scary person he is,but I like the mystery and craziness he creates.My curiousity is stirred now about who-or-what he is.He confuses me,my mind is blown,yet I need more of his confusion! Please update soon!
Mahwiii
#5
Chapter 4: WHAT IS THIS
is may guy cherryish? *-* /i have a feeling udk either xD/
anyway.. why did u bring may guy here now its hard T^T
sfjhsfkdsjhklsj it's too hard
nooo
he is too cute cuter than the june guy too D:
jdksfhk;j
what what what what
idk what i will do if i was her /i'm glad am not her/
maybe she should just run away from both but then... she can't like...
uh uh uh
will tho since it's june she should go to the june guy right...?
yeah
now u missed up my feels
pfsh u evil twinnie
Mahwiii
#6
Chapter 3: o.o
i thought he was cherryish but then it would be too obvious i guess xD
now i'm curious.. but it seems its not a girl.. :o maybe it's really him
fekjfdgjlewkkejngkj
or is it the may guy now? ...
ok what am i even saying..
tho i can't keep myself from blushing when i imagine this guy xD
and it's not cliche psshh its cute xD
fate is cute <3
yet its so cruel to me ;-;
/sobs
Mahwiii
#7
Chapter 2: too cute ;-;
he is just so adorable <3333
i like guys with small eyes somehow xD
/imagined him as onew../
i don't think that its what u meant it to be but i have a feeling he is somehow that guy that came to her in may... but maybe he came to her as his 'young' self so now he don't seem so kiddish? but if it was him then she would've known and..
when he said "does it matter?" i just somehow my eyes widened and i got goosebmbs all over omggg it just... FATE IS JUST AWESOME ;^; where is my fated love!
i wonder when will a cute stranger come to my door and invite me to dinner /sobs/
^ that was random okay xD
Betsy_Diego
#8
Beautiful :3
soooooooo excited because u made a sequel! Wheeee! ^^
I will wait this until its completeee.
the prologue isn't that bad, its beautiful author-nim. :D
Hwaiting for the next chappie author nim!
Mahwiii
#9
Chapter 1: odjjfhjhkgdiofjkflj
/takes a deep breath/
Yah it's not crappy! her thoughts was needed! *-* she is in love with him omg i can't wait for the guy to appear... pekiltdlkghkdljkledk
am so exited all of sudden xD
yaah i blame u!
but now the guy will be named or nameless too? :o
somehow "kid" reminds me of someTHING.... but i don't think u meant him now xD
oh wells xD