Dark Paradise

Description

A kpop world where EXO doesn’t exist as K-pop idols, but they garnered enough attention so that their names were known around the world. They were highly known in the world may it be for good or bad reasons. They were respected by many, but they were also hated by many. What would happen when one of the main heads fell for one of Korea’s biggest idols? Could what he felt for her, or how he acted towards her be called love? What he felt was it something darker? Did he become obsessed with the beautiful red-head?  He’d create a dark paradise for the one he swore he loved.

 

Foreword

I didn’t know who he was at the moment. I had never seen him before. He wasn’t the type to come hang out in our neck of the woods. His life was so different and mysterious from the ones I had witnessed in my country. He was a foreigner that I would come to know more than I would have liked too. That one night and one dance would change my life and career forever. He had the power of the world in his hands, and he would use it to his will. He was a frightening person to the outside world, but to me he could be the sweetest man alive. Don’t get me wrong, though, I too witnessed this man become a  monster. It frightened me, and I wanted to be free of him, but he would never let me go that was a lesson I learned rather quickly. If anyone got in his way he’d have them gone in an instant. he had claimed me I became his obsession, and he wouldn’t let me go. If he felt threatened by the presence of someone else near me he’d make sure that I’d never see them again. He isolated me from the world yet he gave me as much of the world he thought I needed. The most powerful man in the criminal scene fell in love with me, or better yet he became obsessed and possessive. But to say that i didn’t feel something for him too would be a lie.  Hate? Love? Terror? Pain? Admiration? Exactly what I felt towards him and his lifestyle is hard to explain.

Afterword

Hello i hope this sparks some interest in some of you readers. I’m really excited for this story, so I hope you guys could give it some love :) This isn’t a common 2nexo pairing, but the more I wrote it the more the lead character reminded me of this EXO member. I hope you guys don’t mind me choosing him. Who is he? Please stay tuned to find out ;) Leave your guesses in the comments. Minzy is the lead girl character of the story.

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alcyonne
#1
Chapter 21: Thank you for ending it and on such a happy note too! I didn't think I'd witness their wedding from the first chapter and here we are. They really did go through hell, huh? I'm just glad they found their happiness! Time flies when you write a story and live a busy life. I'm glad you gave us an ending even if you had given us no warning last chap. Better to have a closure than nothing or else we'd be stuck forever haha. Even though it is short it was sweet and filled with the love that Kris and Minzy had. Some good ol fluff and romance right there after the storm. I'm kinda sad now that it is finished though, I'm running out of Minzy stories to read :( but best luck to your future endeavours whatever they may be. Thanks again for all the time and effort you invested in this! Congrats to Mr and Mrs Wu and for you for completing the story!
jiwonku #2
Chapter 21: WHAT? This is the end? still cant get over minzyxjongin so much
alcyonne
#3
Chapter 20: The ending got too real. As Minzy's fan who went through that terrible period in time where most blackjacks turned their backs on her - that almost made me as mad as I was back then. What's bittersweet was her going back to Yifan's arms - I just wish Minzy really did have someone to fall back to during the hate she got. Now back to the story, I reread a few paragraphs just because I wanted to savour it! I really didn't want it to end. The word count was gracious of you but I can never get enough! I do praise you for continuing, I was losing hope since this is your first update of the this year but its okay, you still put this out and it was well worth the time. A lot went on and you fed us well. Minzy finally returned to Yifan/EXO and even spent a year learning the ropes. I love this rekindling of their love and this honesty between them. Now Minzy is EXO's and Yifan's queen and it's just so amazing ; _ ; tho I'm very curious to learn what Sehun or perhaps even Kyungsoo's problems were. I'm guessing some members weren't for Minzy joining the team lol. I feel bad for Kai. I did actually enjoy his moments with Minzy and as grateful as Minzy should be , I was too. He really did make a positive change in her, it just he fell in the process...ah, a little bit of second lead syndrome just hit me in the feels. They're my otp so it's natural but I already accept the story's ship and definitely vouch for Mr and Mrs Wu!
But all that out the way, Minzy is right. After officially announcing her new position, there's danger. I'm scared for the future as I'm excited for it. So until your next update! I can't wait but I shall ♥ Ty for not abandoning this.
jiwonku #4
Chapter 20: Omaigad you update. The confession from kai. I cannt imagine that coming for, but im support him than yifan. Yifan is crazy, and im sad that minzy will never kai :( I really love kai and minzy coz yifan just crazy
alcyonne
#5
Chapter 20: I'M SCREAMING. I haven't read it yet but once i will, I will definitely comment!!! Ty for the update! ♥♥♥
alcyonne
#6
Chapter 19: New reader here! I see that you wrote this ages ago and I'm glad you updated causing me to stumble upon it. The description and foreword was already interesting since you decided to keep the male lead hidden, I admit it really piqued my interest. After finding out it was Yifan, I was definitely surprised, but I didn't hate the idea. Tbh, I love Minzy so much so I welcome all her ships. My babe is too underrated. Anyway, I didn't stop reading this until 3am! You could say I was hooked. The premise of drug rings and gangs is nothing new, but the way you handled it and made it yours was very apparent and I liked that a lot! It didn't make the story too predictable and you added your own twists. For example, Jongin's entry in the story! On the chapter he appeared, I legit flew from my bed because I did not expect it. I'm glad I trusted your words from earlier when you said his entry would be very significant, yet fitting. You were definitely right. Also Yifan/Minzy's relationship travelled a very rough road and I liked that. It was a nice touch of realism in the development of their relationship, giving the story more substance. Now that I've literally binged on this and reached the latest update, I'm happy that Yifan and Minzy finally reunited but at the same time, I'm curious how the story will go on from this. So I'll be waiting for the next update Authornim! Good luck! xoxo
Rosaloveskris #7
Chapter 19: Glad you are back. Love the chapter
jiwonku #8
Chapter 19: Hmmm i dont know how to express my feeling right now. Honestly i prefer kai for minzy since some chapter before. i dont mind kris but i dont believe it that minzy choose kris again. But after all i like this update, it is unpredictable
shaylove93
#9
New subbie cant wait ^_^
Rosaloveskris #10
Chapter 19: Omg you are back can't wait for the new chapter