Chapter 1: You're pretty good in French ! I loved the plot and Ommmmmmmmmg, the place and story were perfect, good job ! Baekai is such my fav otp hgegekhgjhejg <fangirling ok..
otherwise i'm fluent in French and the translations are quite great, but in french you can't tell " tu es très chaud" if you want to say to someone else that he's fine and looks hot.. It's like i'm telling that you're warm.. Or that your body is warm..it's about sensation not physical aspect ! You'd rather say " tu es vraiment beau gosse.", i think in english it's " you're very attractive" which is more used in France ! Except that fact ( and the little fault, " tu est" there's no "t" ) IT'S AWWSOME. I hope it will help you ! THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY.

Yaaah DAEBAK!! HAHAHA.. i liked it very much! ;) It's so funny that KAI looses the painting and that he can't resist Baekhyun - Well, let's be honest, would most of you be able to resist him? Hmm.. i don't think so! XD Anyways, FIGHTING! * ~

I literally snorted at how dumb Jongin is-
like, really? xD

This was very unique though, loved the plot and the way you wrote it! c:

Chapter 1: THIS IS SOOO GOOD OMG!

AND THEY KISSED BEHIND EVERY PILLARS!

OH MY GO!

BAEK IS SOO CUTEEE SGAKAHAJA! JONGIN TOO!


AND FRENCH! OH GOD FRENCH! AGAKSGSHA! IM DYINGGGGG!


PS: SEQUEL? ♡

Chapter 1: LOVE IT! There's so many kissing and I really love that part! It's funny how Jongin can't resist kissing Baekhyun when they are in the middle of a chase. And hey, I learned French! The plot is unique and I so so love it. Overall, it is funny, witty, exciting, engaging and fluffy. Thumbs up for it.

Chapter 1: OMG OMG OMG I LOVED IT OMG SO CLEVER <3 <3 <3

Chapter 1: uwaaah it's great!! XD I love it!!!
really love it~!
and, make a sequel please~~? hehehe

Chapter 1: uwaaah it's great!! XD I love it!!!
really love it~!

Chapter 1: Very nice fic!so much fun reading this..Authornim..can you please let Jongin do “Je vais vous prendre au lit avec moi.” to Baekhyun??