It's a cold night

Description

In times of need, I'll be there to comfort you

Even if you refuse me or push me away.

Foreword

This is my first project,,, a bit rusty but getting there.

It's short atm... I'm not sure if I want to make it H or continue the story or release just short ones like this.

So I'll wait for your COMMENTS!

Need you opinion...

 

Thanks and enjoy.

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purpleungu
#1
i enjoyed reading this up to first half part of the story, and then i was lost...got confused..<br />
you could probably explain a bit about what you meant by kyuhyun's scheme from siwon's pov. and bring out a bit what was kyuhyun's thinking at the time too...<br />
i know it's hard to write a story, so i give you a big credit for it, (as myself i dont write stories) and practice makes perfect...Caiyo!!!! sorry if my comment annoys you...
XPineX #2
O.o i dont quite understand the ending though haha :D anyways good try on ur first project story.
farmer
#3
@Lilviscious<br />
This was my first project and I do need a lot of improvement so thanks for letting my know what I need to work on! :D
YuuYuu
#4
warm grinning boy.. lol..
Park_Yoonji #5
I was on the verge of tears for the first few paragraphs but after that i wanna laugh... <br />
ehhh... wierd... but i like this though:)
farmer
#6
@wonsugarkyu-b<br />
Hahaha no, killing kyu would be out of the blue :D<br />
chapters... I thought about it but my ideas are still kinda like oneshot but slightly relatable...I'm still kinda confused? But more Wonkyu love is definitely on its way!
wonsugarkyu-b
#7
woooaahh! for a minute there I thought Kyuhyun died *calming my breath* I had to re-read that part to get my bearings right. >.<<br />
<br />
Of course this isn't over, not for several chapters i hope.<br />
Let's fill this site with WonKyu Love shall we?! :D<br />
NomNom
#8
Yey! I enjoy KyuWon now!<br />
But I support all of the couples so.. XD<br />
I have always really enjoyed them. d: