Secret (Discontinued)

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(Before you start reading this story, you should know I stopped writing it and I will be rewriting this story. The new title will be Reflection and I have posted the first chapter. Go check it out!!!)

 

Have you ever had a secret?........Something you’ve had to keep for a long time because you were scared of what other people might think or how they might react? A secret you can’t tell your best friend, and you’ve known them forever. There has always been that time where it almost slipped out of your mouth, but you were quick enough to catch yourself. You’re to the point where you start to shut people out of your life, there’s no one you can trust, and you’d rather be alone. You want to tell someone, but there’s always that doubt and thought in the back of your mind telling you that they won’t understand or why bother telling them, you’ll just lose them. Keeping a secret to yourself can eat you from the inside and make you into a completely different person. Keeping something from other people can make you do things to make sure no one finds out, and if they get suspicious you try to play it cool so they think nothing of it.

Taeyeon has kept a secret from her friends and form everyone else for a long time. She used to be a lively and happy person, and now she rarely smiles anymore. Her friends have asked what’s wrong, and her answer is always the same, “Nothing, I’m okay,” when in reality she’s broken and doesn’t know how to deal with things anymore. She’s wanted to tell them, but she’s scared. What will they think? What will they say about me? Will they leave? I don’t want to be alone. The thought of losing them frightens her, but she doesn’t realize she’s been pushing them away little by little ever since she’s started to change into a different person. Her friends still stick by her side but there comes a point where you can only help so much, and there’s nothing else you can do. And when she’s lost all hope there’s a new person that comes into her life that she begins to trust. Will she tell the secret she’s kept for so long? Or will she keep it to herself until she hits the breaking point?

Important Characters

Kim Taeyeon

Tiffany Hwang

Kwon Yuri

Minor Characters:

There will also be other Girls’ Generation members but they won’t be as important as Taeyeon, Tiffany, and Yuri……or at least not right now. I’m not really sure yet. And I might throw in some characters from other groups’ maybe. It’s my third story I’m writing and the first one I’m posting, so bare with me. If you don’t understand something or if something is written awkwardly please do tell me, I’d appreciate it. Thanks for reading my fanfic and hope you enjoy. One more thing, I’m still debating whether it will be a TaeNy or YulTae or other story. What do you want it to be? I’d appreciate any feedback

Foreword

“I’m sorry….”

Taeyeon said to no one on the other line. She couldn’t hold her pain anymore and just broke down.

“Stop crying. You make yourself look weak.”

“G-go away, l-leave me alone.”

“See Taeyeon this is why you need me. I show no emotion and with me you will never feel pain, you will never feel sorrow, and most importantly you will never be weak. All that anger your feeling right now, all you have to do is let it out.”

“No….I don’t want to hurt people, I don’t want to be like you, I just want you to leave me alone….LEAVE ME ALONE!”

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cindyvania #1
Chapter 1: Eventhough u warned me that u didn't continue to write this story anymore, i still read it, and i didn't regret it at all, nice story~, i hope Reflection will be better as u promised ;) update soon~
Va_asianloverz
#2
Chapter 17: please update soon
Jae-Eun #3
Chapter 12: author,please I beg you make YulTae! Cause i love this couple,but there's so few fanfics about them and a lot about TaeNy. I'm tired of TaeNy. And I'd love it to be YulTae. Hope you will have great fanfics about this couple in the future! And I will continue reading your works...
TaeTiSic_ss
#4
Chapter 17: Taeny for the win!!!
Nyah-Nyah
#5
Chapter 17: It seems to me that Jessica had planned that... Especially when she said "she'll always choose Tiffany over you" so, for me it was Jessica...
About YulTae and TaeNy... I was hopping for YulTae, I love this couple, but, I don't know anymore, this is getting confusing, and giving me headache.. Especially because Taeyeon is hurting both of them, so, YulTae or TaeNy whatever... I think Yuri should just go, I don't know... I'm starting to think that both of them should reject Taeyeon... Oh well, I'll wait to see what happens...
This chapter was sad, but was really Great!!!
Good job author, see ya next! ^^
KwonJiralCoral
#6
Chapter 15: RIP laptop. </3

I'm looking forward your next update author! :-)
KwonJiralCoral
#7
Chapter 1: Author your story reminds me of the Kdrama Hyde, Jekyll, and Me. :-)
Va_asianloverz
#8
Chapter 14: please update soon
Nyah-Nyah
#9
Chapter 15: Aah that's sad... Poor laptop :/
But, I'll be waiting patiently till you come back! XD
See ya! :D