Damn dark XD but it's amazing

Chapter 1: I'm too scared to ask for sequel ;__;

Chapter 1: omg.. wow.. i just.. lulu no.. dont.. pls dont ; ; ; ;

Chapter 1: Hhnnnnnnnnnggg~ you have no idea how much I feel for HoMin >//< and even though Luhan is a psycho here, he was spot on about their relationship c':

Also, I have to disagree with the others. I don't think this'll need a sequel of any sorts. It's awesome as it is. Maybe a chapter about how Yunho or Chami or anyone else view it? That'd be nice ^^

And ysh ofc, Chami bby is so gorgeous *_* Queen of my Heart tbh :p

Awesome writing skills missy! I expect a lot of you c; oh and ps: would be nice too if you'd continue King Of Sands *_*
I know you're editing now, but really I'd be great if you decide to continue it :D Kudos~

Chapter 1: can you make a sequel for this? aaaaahhh my changminnie,
ofc he's absolutely gorgeus, no one can defeated him, i really want a sequel,

Chapter 1: Sequel! Sequel! Changmin is my ultimate bias but DAYUM THIS IS GOOD! Even just another one shot for this would be awesome! <3 Great story, Author-nim!

Chapter 1: *sobs hysterically* I think you just murdered my ultimate bias. Yunho would be devastated. I'm devastated...and quite disturbed. LuHan's right in that HoMin is a beautiful thing. My ultimate OTP feels.
I support everyone else in that a sequel would be nice.

Chapter 1: Beautiful HoMin ♥
it seem that Luhan did not understand it correctly , the feeling of yunho for changmin is not all about he's Physical Only , But also what changmin Represents for yunho and what he give
I Like the story it's show up how match HoMin love each other ^w^ I love them too

Chapter 1: heums...beautiful...

Chapter 1: Though I don't like the idea of Chami (or Yunnie) being killed (that's in any fic mind u) I would be lying if I said that I didn't like this story. Your story is very well written to the point where I literally had goosebumps and wanted to cry at that ending. It's poetically heartbreaking really. You managed to capture HoMin's love for one another so beautifully, even from the perspective of someone consumed by jealousy and unhappiness in a way that hints toward a not-so-good ending and yet strings u along to the very last sentence. I agree with some of the other people who have commented about a sequel only because there is so much left unsaid and unconfirmed by that cliff-hanger. I was glad to read that u have an open mind towards a sequel b/c I think that it would be interesting to see where this goes and how it gets there. For now, since there currently is no part II, I will just say that I think that this is one of the best HoMin stories out there. Even with the psycho!Luhan (& w/the possibility that one of my otp babies didn't make it). An amazing read for sure.