Elemental Rust

Description

Gods linger in a world that no longer needs them. Among them is Chen, who will destroy humanity, unless a group of humans change his mind.

Foreword

Crumbling is not an instant's Act
A fundamental pause
Dilapidation's processes
Are organized Decays —

 

'Tis first a Cobweb on the Soul
A Cuticle of Dust
A Borer in the Axis
An Elemental Rust —

 

Ruin is formal — Devil's work
Consecutive and slow —
Fail in an instant, no man did
Slipping — is Crashe's law —
                   
by Emily Dickinson
 
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Will humanity crumble?
Or will Chen change his mind? 
 

Author's Note:

Hello, this is going to be a more serious fic based around (eventual) friendship between Chen and the Luhan, Lay, Kris, and Tao. It's been a while since I have posted a fanfic so I'm a little rusty. Updates should be every 1-2 weeks on Sundays. 
 

Reviews:

"I like how dark it was and how the development of each character balances out throughout the story." - Chunkee__ from ♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪ 

StephLovesKCulture @ Forgetful Flowers Request Shop ©- "The characters are portrayed in a realistic way. They are far from perfect as they do have each their own flaws and issues to deal with."  

"All your characters were perfect. They have flaws which I like very much . They also fit their roles perfectly. It's rare for me to love all of the characters. . ." - roronoA from Sorceress' Graphic and Review Shop

Exotic_Sarang from Enchanted Review Shop - "I like it, it's very original." 

 

Credit for the current poster goes to XX_KISS from Enchanted Postershop 

Credit for the first  background and the poster goes to RSonta from Hugs and Kisses

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StephLovesKCulture #1
Chapter 16: Good luck with the move! ;) Do arrive safely ^^
hananii19 #2
Chapter 16: Hope you get to college safety :3!
StephLovesKCulture #3
Chapter 15: Yah Luhan! Why don't you apply pressure to it- You silly boy.. ^^ But still we do love him. Hmm .. a fake frienship eh Chen, we'll see about that.. Keep up the good work!
StephLovesKCulture #4
Chapter 14: Anneyeong! And mianhaeyo, i missed AGAIN 2 updates of your story :s I just read this one..My my my a lot has happened in this chapter.. Sehun and Luhan - Hmm no words for that ^^ HUNHAN! ^^ Your story will always be one of a kind, nothing I read before on AFF.. I will now continue reading the next chapter! ^^ FIGHTING!
hananii19 #5
Chapter 15: Finally xD!! I love this chapter xD! Even thou it was somehow random to see Luhan bleeding but a unique way to develop this 'fake friendship' xD!
hananii19 #6
Chapter 14: AYEEE XD Love this chapter^^!!!
StephLovesKCulture #7
Chapter 13:
Completely Irrelevant Side note: While I read the title for this chapter again - there's that song that comes to mind.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dLhFDYQHDQY. Ooh, before I forget - Did your shoulder heal well? Is it better already? :)
StephLovesKCulture #8
Chapter 13: As promised - again with a little delay - mianhaeyo! * bows apologetically * I do like your update, and I know why.. my HUNHAN feeling! *fangirling a bit* It's so sweet, how they interact with each other.. Lol, the nicknames are very well choosen, I like those one.. Lol, Disaster and Music and Time = Meet the "Bad Boys".. Anticipating for the next chapter to come up! ;) FIGHTING! XD I'm curious about what's going to happen to Chen..
StephLovesKCulture #9
Chapter 12: Annyeong! I'm so sorry to neglect your story - AGAIN! - Mianhaeyo! Really, it's certainly not my intention tho :s Anyways, I read the first updated chapter this one here - And I don't have any clue whatsoever who might be the people in the last part of the scene.. OMG, poor Chen.. He's drunk, i'm not sure why he didn't again but boy, he's going to cause some major trouble I guess.. which isn't that good as there are some not so nice people watching his every move. I don't think it was a good idea to let every anxiety and issues out while drinking - always bad idea! Must remember that Chen. I'm curious about the next chapter ! So here we go! XD
hananii19 #10
Chapter 13: HunHan! Everybody loves HunHan somehow xD~
Disaster and Music...really interesting, I could think it's kyungsoo for a second xD? Disaster=satan=D.O xD?
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